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I'd rather watch tears roll down your face
than face this aged. framed-portrait of who you were.


we're never what we are. we were what we're meant to never be.
glass painted on a poem in a dark room. she'd cry
those blue-blood songs of ink running dry- and lead.hearted
silhouettes. and we wore the war paint of disaster
it followed us to our fate. tapered the wavering doubt.
drown it out. just drown it out.
in misconceptions

and I watched your smile crack. under pressure
these were no lines of age
stage-exit. style. only this time there was no one to applaud your bow


and these walls talk too much
we're sitting on cloud 9- and it's raining.
and I'm falling- born in the descent. waiting for the ground to give birth

because these stars never shut the fuck up


my hands are trembling.
and I'm waiting for you to shatter.
she's nothing.
and I'm waiting on that trigger finger to point the blame to me.

and her face runs under my tears. it's so beautiful.



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On Sunday November 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:
love it, the ending is so real and it all means so much, relly great :o)


On Sunday October 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (11) writes:
Your writing is just so beautiful. Somewhat melancholy, but I love it.


On Thursday September 29th, 2005, Crysa (41) writes:
Someone suggested that I read your stuff, I'm very glad I did.


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, abattoir (144) writes:
again, I'm left enfeeble.by the way it was.were. and you new, inevitably, what it would become.your style is mindblowing.


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Mahakala (255) writes:
leaves me with the feeling of regret yet I don't think that I have done anything to regret (well at least not yet)...great write six..


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (468) writes:
there are some killer lines in here... and the sense of it is borderline-pschotic, mournful, washed up, strung out, lost and lonely...


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (468) writes:
on the flipside... i don't dig.the random fullstops... only because you're also using them in the "correct" fashion. What's wrong with any of these: "-" "_" "~" ":" etc... the meaning vanishes out of this here and there...


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (468) writes:
get rid of those full stops. they fuck this up... unless you intend the reader to pause at those points... but that doesn't seem to fit... i even read it out loud to check...


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
Dramatic pauses, my male dear. ;)


On Wednesday August 17th, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:
hmmm... I like it. But i do not love this one. Some good lines, but as a whole it just doesn't do it for me.


On Wednesday August 17th, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:
I do not know what i think of this yet. It seems different than most of your others. The flow... just a bit strange to me. I need to go read it again.


On Wednesday August 17th, 2005, braindead_poet (578) writes:
not bad


On Monday August 15th, 2005, stormtalk (884) writes:
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On Tuesday August 16th, 2005, Jay Jii (332) writes:
Ground Control? Is this the lollipop factory?


On Tuesday August 16th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
Are you calling me a sucker? ;)


On Monday August 15th, 2005, glasshouse (780) writes:
Wow. Wow. -Glass


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Rachel (392) writes:
Jesus...


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
... "because these stars never shut the fuck up".. ! I'll have to come back, you beautiful monster.


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
speechless. i love this.


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, Possesion (189) writes:
So...amazing.


On Sunday August 14th, 2005, sIo (872) writes:
dear god Jon. this made me cry.



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