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[empty words] you break my heart.

[youdisgustme]

with my tongue dripping of your deciet-
leaving trails of my conviction. down your chest
your sweat tastes of contempt
-and I hate you for your beauty.

your lips- taste of poison. and a hint of those late night tears
that you so -very- deservingly cry.
brushing the hair out of your eyes. you make me sick
whispering your desires into my ear
as if I could care about you.

a slight kiss- on back of your neck. sending a chill down your spine
breathing my lied loves into your skin.
dragging. my hands up your thighs. I detest your moans.

you fall [so easily] for every empty word I throw at you
leaving your heart on this cutting table.
under the knife I hold so high- trusting me not to destroy you
you were always so gullible

mouth the three words that you so long to hear-
watch my lips- and

'i love you' : has never been so hollow

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On Friday January 19th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1106) writes:

ditto samone

On Monday November 6th, 2006, SamoneDrone (404) writes:

Irony can be such a doule edged sword. This was vivid and intense. ....-samone

On Monday November 6th, 2006, SamoneDrone (404) writes:

*double

On Monday November 6th, 2006, verablue (156) writes:

brutal. i felt torn while reading this....not knowing weather i wanted to reach through the computer screen and strangle you or sit back with a sadistic grin on my face and laugh with you.

On Thursday September 8th, 2005, Tangle Box Tales (167) writes:

You have insight, you have wit, you have a view of the world few have, and thankfully, for the rest of us, you have a way with words and you take everything you see and hear and you lump it together, stir it all up until it seems like one big mess

On Thursday September 8th, 2005, Tangle Box Tales (167) writes:

and from that mess you draw out the words letter by letter, period by period, coma by coma, because there is a reason for every letter and every marking and every space between, and you place them with precision, with style, until we finally see what you

On Thursday September 8th, 2005, Tangle Box Tales (167) writes:

until we finally see what you see, and it is brilliant.

On Friday August 12th, 2005, heart broken suicide (25) writes:

this is really good you are really talented with words

On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (38) writes:

Hey abot the comment you left on my thing. I didn't know him for a few weaks I knew him for months, more than a year and if you knew what happened you would understand. Oh and I really like your poem.Good choice of words

On Sunday July 24th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:

damn, this is fuckin intense. amazing and full of this raw, empty thing I'd hate anywhere else. however, something I wish I could capture in words.. something you've written in a very beautiful way.

On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:

like i said before...this is fucked up and if someone ever thought these things of me-id choke them to death. but otherwise this is very well written. intensity is always a good thing.

On Saturday July 23rd, 2005, Sin (1623) writes:

damn Jon...brutal yet appealing in a very disturbing way

On Thursday July 21st, 2005, Evil (547) writes:

ouch. this stung. this is the "hate-sex" poem of the century. nicely done.

On Thursday July 21st, 2005, manywalks (949) writes:

Well my little taco bean, this is going to the top of my list.

On Thursday July 21st, 2005, shadowsinthelight (208) writes:

Jon, this is great! Now take back what you said on the IM the other day and do not ever repeat those words again! S.

On Thursday July 21st, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:

Christ man, this is the line that we cross sometimes, just beware the consequences: sometimes the truth of our actions matches the truth of our wisdom matches the truth of our downfall. Cool write all the same. ~Ryan

On Thursday July 21st, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:

this is superb... I love the concept, it's something that I'm familiar with and you portray the emotions, and events perfectly. awesome. thank you.

On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:

Wow.. I don't know whether to hate you or love you for this.

On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, Just a Rose (33) writes:

grins, this is awesome

On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:

ha ha ha.....This is a grand.....Oh I love when people admit they are human

On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, no one at all (9) writes:

wow. beautiful.

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:

makes me light up at the oncoming destruction. like watching broken glass wish it were a pane

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:

Oh,man...that first verse is killa dilla.sweat tastes of contempt...the disgust is overflowing.I fucking love it...The whole piece felt like watching someone having a major break down and having a hearty laugh about it...

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:

...the seeds sewn coming back home...faces smiling,glowing...armed to the teeth with retribution's scythe...watching them...disgusted...yet entertained by the entire development...

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:

...You've seen it a million times...but the satisfaction still remains...the life of an assassain.Killa Dilla.

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

Razor sharp, very thick with contempt, but you out it so well.

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, purr_verse (1427) writes:

biting, softsinister and altogether excellent. compelling and powerful from beginning to end.

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, indefined (684) writes:

fuck man. that was a hammer to the head. smashed me out of the ballpark and through some poor fool's windscreen.

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (317) writes:

breath taking. This enchanted me. I was hooked onto every word. You're not a failed poet after all. -kitty

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Mahakala (255) writes:

Wow...great write...kinda makes me feel guilty and I don't know why...intence...totally loving it...

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, Raven (373) writes:

Oh. My. Fucking. God. Jon. You're right. You aren't the poet you used to be. You've evolved again... into a better one.

On Tuesday July 19th, 2005, sIo (872) writes:

i could easily slice the skin from my lips and beg with swift whispers for the same hands that cut my heart to soothe my aching kiss. this was shattering. simply shattering.

On Wednesday July 20th, 2005, thornyrose (29) writes:

intense and well written...how some get so much pleasure out of anothers pain...

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