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she kissed the sun-banked sky as she sang to a new world of nothing
on a cliff above the clouds- clinging to catastrophe.
it can't break her fall.

not this time.

-
she's an artist.
painting her fractures/ empty silhouettes with simple contradictions
an entity in ambiguity. and I watched her fall
drifting among what once was lost- it never matters
and she couldn't care less.

while I couldn't care more

the dirt on her wings from the days of sitting idle-
urged to fly- the blue above and the black below/ she wasn't ready
noone is ever ready for the descent.
and the ground is ever so unforgiving.


and we watched the cars collide- as the night stretched on
with my hands around her throat. and her knife to my temple.
and it never amounted to anything.
and nothing ever meant a thing- as she broke my heart with goodbye
and stole the silence. ripped the violence.
from my eyes.

and she cried.

[she's an artist]
painting murals and landscapes- with her ice tipped wings
for when she drifts too close to the sun.

waiting to catch a glimpse- piece together a promise.
and break her neck.
with the ground closing in.
she wasn't ready.

and her eyes met mine. for a second the world made sense.
then I blinked. and it was gone.



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On Sunday October 9th, 2005, CharlottesWeb (615) writes:
White...cold...endings...that had no beginnings...random thoughts and feelings this brought. I can't sentence properly.


On Sunday July 24th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
that ending is fuckin astounding. heartbreaking. beautiful. painful. i love this..


On Thursday June 23rd, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (360) writes:
i can live vicariously through your words...you are a story teller with a melancholy tone...-l-


On Saturday May 28th, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
every time i read one of your poems i feel like i'm standing on the corner of a street or a dark room watching a split second of beautiful tragedy


On Wednesday June 1st, 2005, Velvet_Raventon (692) writes:
wow, yes, that's a great way to describe the feeling... but it's also so much more... Wonderful work, ~V.


On Saturday May 28th, 2005, elisa (1990) writes:
'...and her eyes met mine. for a second the world made sense....'.....i know the exact moment that second happened............loneliness left the world~elisa


On Saturday May 28th, 2005, Dr Benway (50) writes:
Painted a wonderful picture in my brain, this has to be one of your more vivid poems. Like always, wonderful work.


On Friday May 27th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
'she kissed the sun-banked sky as she sang to a new world of nothing on a cliff above the clouds-clinging to catastrophe. it can't break her fall...'


On Friday May 27th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
...dammit...the beaut[y]ful saddness in this...the pain-unmasked...and the truth enveloped inside of this...just strikes my skin so amazingly....this is incredibly spoken...your voice is fucking beautiful.


On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:
Oh Jon, this is amazing. Its so.. whistful .. just lovely.


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:
Jesus Jon, not even sure what to say about this. Just know it's felt. ~Ryan


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:
my god...this is awesome jon..you have no idea how tis affected me. damn.


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:
i forgot to mention how fucking awesome that ending was...yeah-i was there.


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, SamoneDrone (404) writes:
i'm at a loss of words. i don't even know what to say, but i had to say somthing. rather i'll sit here in silence due to the fact that i could never find the words to adequatly describe how amazing this piece is. *silence* ....-samone


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, NikesRain (1399) writes:
absolutely beautiful, tender ad breathtaking brushed with sadness .... excellent


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, sIo (872) writes:
god...


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:
Jesus, can I get a respirator over here?


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Northstar (453) writes:
fuck you--for being so fucking talented *smiles* what do i say to a piece like this--every time i read something by you my heart stops in my chest for a moment or two and i almost die---this is so tragically beautiful and so masterfully crafted


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:
This is a wonder,Jon...the cars collide verse was over the top...sheer brutality showing no weakness...the fall...the reaching...the spinning...the impact...the dying glimmer...then...nothing.


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
"the dirt on her wings from the days of sitting idle-" I always wonder who your shes are. Brilliant write, dear jon. Stealing the silence.. You have a way with words..


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
And your work is always heartbreaking yet beautiful at the same time, in a way that I can't grasp. I see myself in every line.. Every word.. Sometimes they are so vague that I can fit them into any situation I'm in..


On Saturday May 21st, 2005, Elegant Kiss (315) writes:
And for that - I thank you. For your unknowing comfort.. Respectfully.


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:
i know who the shes are, but jon would never admit it.


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
Do you now?


On Monday May 23rd, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:
indeed i do.



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