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I sat under the stars tonight- and wished upon a corpse
as I tipped my glass to hollywood.


'and there's beauty in the breakdown' she said-
with a glimmer in her eye- that screamed of broken.down.lies
and empty bottles of another lost dream
and it's easy to tell yourself that it's always for a reason
when we all live too long to go back
.and just long enough to regret.

[and I will always fucking let you down]

and the breakdown isn't so beautiful- I say
with a gastank on empty- and a road to nowhere in the distance
.and yesterday never looked so appealing.

and fate.
is my worst enemy



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On Wednesday March 5th, 2008, Dysphoria (163) writes:
It's so hard to find the words that say so little but mean so much. Your words touch my soul.


On Friday May 13th, 2005, elisa (1990) writes:
always turning my sky into a graveyard....all of time happens in an instant, we're just sitting in the present looking up through our past while thinking of our future....this is just....ouch~elisa


On Friday May 13th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
That's where I got the first line from ;)


On Friday May 13th, 2005, elisa (1990) writes:
that put a Big Smile on my face:)


On Friday May 13th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
ive realized..that there are many depths to the deepness of this, one being a depth the reader can see/feel/digest, and on


On Friday May 13th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
......an even deeper level that is much more personal [to you] that the recipient of this fine piece could not begin to concieve of entirely...


On Friday May 13th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
...leading even deeper&deeper into depths that make this fine write all the more wonderous...added to the fact that it was concieved of by you---makes it deeply fantastical.


On Thursday May 12th, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:
oh god. that first line... "and wished upon a corpse" very grusome. and "I will always fucking let you down" That one really stings. thank you for writing this Jon. it was lovely. terribly sad. but lovely. ~Natelle~


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, evolve (2261) writes:
Submission by word; don't waste time biting the ache of the asphalt. Your jaw will weaken. Fate was never in our hands...but instinct is man's best friend.


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, evolve (2261) writes:
..it read better than you let on.


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
dammit...this explodes...in my head...due to my lack of ability to conjuer up a comment worthy of such a masterful-masterpiece---i send *YOU* roses;) [100 count]


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, XTwistedOrchidX (106) writes:
"And yesterday never looked so appealing"--- This hit me because it's been how I've been feeling lately... Beautiful poem.


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, NikesRain (1399) writes:
damn Jon, you always know just how to stab in just the right place......great write....slowly achingly killing


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, swing_the_hammer (72) writes:
Jon, you rock my face off. at least i could empty my bottles of lost dreams while talking to you at 2 in the morning, thanks for that.


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, Jedi_MindFuck (315) writes:
i have to go to work now but i felt compelled to let you know that i enjoyed this immensely before i left. i'll return to comment properly later this evening. excellent write.


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, Lab Rat (315) writes:
but how elegent our kiss


On Thursday May 12th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:
agreed, wonderful write, Jon.


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
I'm glad that's all this made you think of...:-/


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, Lab Rat (315) writes:
made me think of alot... thats simply all i decided to leave as comment. Stop fishing q: haha


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
what happened to my


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
it took out my < 3


On Wednesday May 11th, 2005, Lab Rat (315) writes:
..... i have no clue, it doesn't like you i reckon



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