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novocain.d nights lip-locked with the un.believable
and a taste of delusion.

chapped lips- and the reality of dreams creating paradise

with undersold emotions. and overused imagination- life is so fucked up
in that way that makes it so beautiful
and the rain never seems to stop falling when the sun comes out.

a trivial piece to an even more- unimportant puzzle. it sometimes seems
tack.d together with a promise of forever- and negligence
pick.pocket-ed and misplaced among the catacombs of denial.
this melancholy absence-formed liaison- pierces
and tomorrow seems like such a lie
but please do. tell it to me again.

with a broken-angled smile. and a trigger.happy- vendetta
the skies are much too distant to be anything more than dust

and the stars don’t shine at midnight- like they used to
with a half-burnt cigarette. and a story to tell
this will always be my life




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On Thursday August 25th, 2005, abattoir (144) writes:
you made me remember.I pick up the specktacles, you take me in, make me see what your saying...and, I want more.


On Thursday April 21st, 2005, frozen (741) writes:
Amazing...write


On Thursday April 21st, 2005, Jay Jii (332) writes:
Such a tender and longing piece. "a trivial piece to an even more- unimportant puzzle" - absolutely marvelous.


On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
I love you, seckzie messican boy.


On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:
Your lip descriptions do me proud...this was like wafting through the clouds on a starless night...until the crash landing of a last stanza earthed me again in the foreverness of reality...


On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:
a toothpick may be able to remove my pulp from the cracks in the sidewalk...and then again,maybe not.Sad and beautiful...like a crying angel.


On Tuesday April 12th, 2005, Raven (373) writes:
What can I say that hasn't already been said? You write beauty in your words, no matter what the subject matter or tone may be.


On Monday April 11th, 2005, DoctorAsh (505) writes:
::applauds:: excellent poems mr six .. you never cease to create beauty in your letters -wonderfuly done


On Monday April 11th, 2005, Velvet_Raventon (692) writes:
You have 2 sides I know: 1 that has fun in the chat room, and 1 that writes incredible poetry. That was AWESOME! ~V.


On Sunday April 10th, 2005, NikesRain (1399) writes:
i loved the opening lines of this. wonderful contemplative/reminiscent feel it has then the ending bringing it right up front. outstanding


On Sunday April 10th, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:
I'll echo what Tim said - this feels so tangible yet distant, yearning and beautiful. Wonderful write, you're simply quite amazing. Thank you.


On Sunday April 10th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:
This is defeating...like watching your first love mouth the words,"i love you" to another from across a crowded room...you see(and feel) every syllable.


On Sunday April 10th, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
awesome. i love the feel of this. starts and ends perfectly



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