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[mixed.drink] melodies

it's like that song. everyone has it
the song that catches your ear as you drink your life away
lost in cheap vodka and bathroom stall romances
a lipstick collar.d memento- and nothing matters in the morning.

nobody cares about the dirty glasses- or forgotten melodies
that song. that one that you've never heard
but know so well.

and it never matters when your bottle tips to the side
no.

but you can always hear it ringing- taunting.
reminding of that time when you were happy-
that one time.

fuck.this.

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On Thursday September 1st, 2005, abattoir (144) writes:

if I could help myself I'd hate you for being so fucking great.this is a masterpiece.

On Thursday April 21st, 2005, Jay Jii (332) writes:

Awesome. This paints a very vivid picture. Great stuff.

On Monday March 21st, 2005, SamoneDrone (404) writes:

i love the first stanza. this poem so eloquently describes a feeling i put so much effort into forgetting; a feeling that, never-the-less, always returns. great job. .....-samone

On Monday March 21st, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:

always amazing...never ceasing...your talent...just @%$#!!^&!...this piece just grips and grasps...such nights and times and drunken truths and mirky waters i try and swim thru...this completely resonates w/me.

On Sunday March 20th, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:

and i still think you could be one hell of a emo songwriter. cheer up quick emo kid;)

On Sunday March 20th, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:

there is a point where you have to realize that the "lipstick collars" and nights with "cheap vodka", "drinking your life away" to "bathroom stall romances"-become a problem. your problem. stop doing it...it makes life

On Sunday March 20th, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:

smiley. but i must say..that second stanza was incredible. i feel it.

On Wednesday March 16th, 2005, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:

"that song. that one that you've never heard but know so well." - yeah, I know it... Good one, man. Ciao, T/S

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

And you've hit the nail on the head yet again...

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, Whisper (136) writes:

This write is brilliant. It describes me so well. ~matt~

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:

Shit.. "that one time." .. Gah, when you write like this I want to steal you away and make it better.

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, manywalks (949) writes:

Sixy-baby, you never disappoint do you. Yes, this was brillant.

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:

brilliance.... I love the grunge, I love the regret, I love the cynacism and anger, and resignation..... the simile - just perfect. You rock. Thank you.

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, Lydia Jade (784) writes:

...you are so fucking great...in all honesty...your poery drives straight into my heart, almost brings tears to my eyes, All can say is, I understand...thank you

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:

Sounds like the way I feel every time I drink scotch. Though I don't need the alcohol to feel the bitter reminiscence it never hurts to help it unfold. Heh. ~Ryan

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:

yea

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