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[for the poets]

and those late nights- midnight dances with an old notebook
a pen that screams sanctuary to reality- if only for a bit
and the few scraps of paper. half written lines, never meant for words
thoughts that break/ an empty trace of logic
-listening to the rain. anything to find a little inspiration. just for tonight.

just for another line. a little more time and another tear to fill one more page
a few more overused emotions to go along with the pain
and another pen- to replace the one worn down. to tell of just one more
wasted life. just one more.
broken dream- another empty heart once too often shattered
and one more shaking hand to press this page
to tell of another useless moment

this is for you.


for the hopeless- that are never willing to die.
and the broken that will never stop pulling the pieces together
this is for you- and you alone.

for the tears that won't stop. and the rooms that are always too dark.
this is my useless moment- my pen to paper
for you

person to person. and heartache to heartache
from poet.to.poet

[this is for you]



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On Saturday July 30th, 2005, cre (507) writes:
I always come back to your words. You are one of the truest friends I have ever known. I want you to know how much I value that.


On Saturday July 30th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
You know I share the sentiments, sweets. I just hope you're doing ok.


On Sunday May 1st, 2005, DarkDruidess (196) writes:
yeah I know I commented before but for some reason tonight this brought tears upon tears... Jon, thanks for the cleansing release of tears.


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:
wonderful. as always. you rock my little world around man.... thank you.


On Friday March 11th, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:
gosh Jon!!! I read it like 3 times and i love it even more every time! this is so sweet and ... well the titale is perfect. well done


On Friday March 11th, 2005, Astra Dei (639) writes:
splendid. i always said you were a god amoung mice. this once more makes that statewment ring true


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
Some of the greatest moments are captured in our agony. You are one of the reasons I decided to join this site. You stir the poetry up a notch and you are not afraid to do so. Breathtaking. What more is there?


On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
I feel lucky that I read this. If that makes sense.. I'm envious of you, Jon.


On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
man...such a truthful piece, spoken as only you could speak...just amazing..its like im looking in to a mirror, and im not the only one there.and i can actually see myself...you bring life to the shit that i write through this poem. thankyou


On Wednesday March 9th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
I really loved how you opened this, such a beautiful piece. perfect in everyway possible. ."and those late nights- midnight dances with an old notebook".. you , damn. . you're such an amazing writer.


On Tuesday March 8th, 2005, CarpeDiemJane (42) writes:
you def capture what it is to be in this kinda life- a poet. remarkable. :)


On Tuesday March 8th, 2005, Alec Pure (332) writes:
wow this was awesome man great job here i love how you exspressed yourself in this peice>


On Monday March 7th, 2005, manywalks (949) writes:
Yes, I think this should stay up. Reflective and beautiful.


On Monday March 7th, 2005, cre (507) writes:
Your words have become a quiet voice in my own dark room. For the moment I'm not feeling quite so alone - I hope you leave this up. It spoke so much to me.


On Sunday March 6th, 2005, SilentStalker (1318) writes:
...this is one of the many examples of freewriting that I so royally suck at doing, yet you make it seem easy...I agree with the others; you should keep it up, not only as a work of brilliance, but as something for those that do need to see it...


On Sunday March 6th, 2005, SilentStalker (1318) writes:
...sometimes the words alone give strength, and if you can do that to someone, you've achieved something far greater than one could ever wish; moving someone as such escapes my ability, but that doesn't mean I can't see when others do it... -Darun


On Sunday March 6th, 2005, Sharon Rose (663) writes:
me too? aww..yer so sweet...heh...seriously, though, this is quite good: leave it up, please..


On Sunday March 6th, 2005, SamoneDrone (404) writes:
this was both beautiful and meaningful. i thoroughly enjoyed it. .........-samone


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, DarkDruidess (196) writes:
thank you for your beautifully insightful words...


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, Jay Jii (332) writes:
Nicely said. And very much appreciated.


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, Raven (373) writes:
This poet says thank you :).._Raven


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, Whisper (136) writes:
This write is a perfect description. Wish there was more I could say. ~Matt~


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:
Thank you. ~Ryan


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, Solace (1421) writes:
*smiles* brilliant work Jon...heartbreakingly beautiful...thanks :)


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, Lynaes (1121) writes:
Yeah, what The Timness said.. Please don't kill it. "for the hopeless- that are never willing to die. and the broken that will never stop pulling the pieces together" ..how can words be so accurate? This is perfect Jon. damn


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, elisa (1990) writes:
you are true blue Jon... *smiles*...no doubt about it.......consider me extremely effected:*) elisa


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, blue (1757) writes:
No, don't kill it is right! This is great, truly a poets write. ~b


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, sIo (872) writes:
i agree with tim. please leave this.-much love-


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, MindRape (861) writes:
awww Jon....this was sweet. How uncharactaristic of you >;) good write


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:
I love you,Jon.Thank you.


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, Six-Out (1820) writes:
I don't know how long this will be up. Depends if I still like it in the morning.


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:
don't kill it,please.


On Saturday March 5th, 2005, purr_verse (1427) writes:
From the opening line, this was magnificent. Please like it in the morning. It's got a nice little star next to it... *faves*



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