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before tonight- I hadn't seen the stars in three months
and now. it's so amazingly beautiful.

peeling the label off of another generic beer. tasting midnight
and nearly grasping forever- but losing it in the smoke
watching the water rushing by. this is what life is
a mirage/ a river running dry. and not a worry in the world

-
like those 3am memories. flashing by like an 80's film
view slightly distorted- but just enough color to matter
pick up lines and broken dreams. at the diner on highway 60
with a cheap motel and a half smoked cigarette
trying to find reality is impossible.

pixilated intentions. and goodbye's can shatter the silence
a broken dream is cliche- and a teardrop from the heavens is heartbreaking
sometimes. just sometimes/ it's all too much.


-standing at the edge. the water is frighteningly fast below
and it's go-time. now or never in the past tense. what should've been
isn't

take a step or live.

it's those pin.pricked dreams. laced in meloncholy denial
that makes goodbye so hard.
and I've never been one for a tear stained parting
with one foot on the crest of a tongue tied melodrama
and the other breaking the plane of what can be
I can see beauty- but I can't touch it
not yet

wash away the past.
and listen to the last words. crush the silence


from farewell to adieu.
this is nowhere near the end.



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On Monday May 12th, 2008, insanemonroe (35) writes:
you're a truly beautiful writer-kat*


On Thursday April 21st, 2005, frozen (741) writes:
Absolutely stunning...this poem is a masterpiece of writing...I love it


On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, Ravenblade (274) writes:
Well Jon, I just couldn't keep myself from commenting on this too much longer, this is an amazing piece like many other you have written, I just wish that you would change your mind...>Raven


On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, Dr Benway (50) writes:
WOW, If I could only explain things a pinch as well as you, I might be pretentious.


On Wednesday January 26th, 2005, Alec Pure (332) writes:
dude the words you used are fucking great i just say the picture you were painting great shit bam


On Monday January 24th, 2005, flying_fox (766) writes:
Sixy, this is just superb. Your words are beautifully melancholy yet oddly relaxing. I find this style of your works are like a meditation in sadness.


On Monday January 17th, 2005, Dommi (122) writes:
"pixilated intentions. and goodbye's can shatter the silence.. a broken dream is cliche- and a teardrop from the heavens is heartbreaking.." this line nailed me to the wall and wouldn't let me down


On Monday January 17th, 2005, Dommi (122) writes:
Well, it was the same type of feeling.. Spiffy work.. Yum.


On Sunday January 16th, 2005, Jay Jii (332) writes:
This work literally gave me goosebumps. Great words.


On Monday January 17th, 2005, stormtalk (884) writes:
There's little else for me to say but to echo Jay Jii... this was a beautiful, impressive, and heart-rending write. You know I felt this.


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, SamoneDrone (404) writes:
great write. it reminds me a little of a wonderful band called the weakerthans. this really was so eloquent and beautiful.................... -samone


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, knightmirror (424) writes:
damnit man you are mustering up tears you've probably shed and germinated in your words then bloosomed in my eyes...*hugs*....thanks for sharing this -chris


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, purr_verse (1427) writes:
there's just something about 3am - disquieting moments... The concluding couplet is outstanding. "tasting midnight and nearly graspinig forever" - marvellous. Talent undeniable; awesome write.


On Friday January 14th, 2005, K_Love (686) writes:
There were too many lines so beautiful I couldn't even begin to quote. Incredible write, every word left me breathless.


On Friday January 14th, 2005, ardneK (100) writes:
You cant comment when a piece is just too good, I read this with awe and understanding, because it just speaks to me, I can feel your emotions wash over me in your words - >|


On Friday January 14th, 2005, Whisper (136) writes:
Is it not beautiful how sad thoughts flourish into great poetry. ~Matt~


On Friday January 14th, 2005, Raven (373) writes:
Damn... "Nearly grasping forever"... this is insane... like a metaphorical hook, I gladly swallowed this line and sinker.._Raven


On Friday January 14th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:
Jesus man *bows* you know I can dig. ~Ryan



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