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my eyes see your life.

my pen bleeds of your pain. as I dip it into your heart
your blood weaves my words- and your tears
/bring to life a picture

my fingers trace your spine- tapping your memories
as my hand creates a miracle.
life- in letters. spread upon a portrait of emotion
mountains of metaphors and [broken] hearts
and my lips can taste your soul

through my veins- pulse a gift [from -me-to- you]
as I trap time in my hands. and you can feel forever
in the beat of my heart, and in the stroke of my brush
upon a papered world- ink to my flesh
and you can watch the world create tomorrow
within the blink of an eye

you see my life through your eyes.

and you bleed of my pain. as I rip you to [shreds]
with an image of what.could've.been-
dreams laid to rest within the confines of a notebook
and my heart stains my sleeve

teardrops/ in harmonic precision- listen to my letters
a brink of delusion. just jump and we'll kiss the stars
maybe graze what is.

and in the end- if you can feel me in your blood
and taste what I've created.
burn with my pain


then my job is done



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On Friday December 3rd, 2004, indefined (726) writes:
this, Jon, is one of the best things I've ever read. seriously. full kudos man. what a warriah.


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, Delphoid-Q (284) writes:
It is indeed... A wonderful contribution to its subject.


On Friday December 3rd, 2004, suicideseason (2161) writes:
Man...you write beautifully,Jon.I've sat here for at least 15 minutes trying to disgorge a decent comment.My words can do this no justice.It's just beautiful.


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, King_Crazy_Dave (419) writes:
this actually struck em as somethign i might write, but better. and its got a lot of weight on your style as opposed to mine, but it rocks. good job mexicant


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, Twilight (2114) writes:
"dreams laid to rest within the confines of a notebook and my heart stains my sleeve" i can feel this...more than you know. beautifully written six.


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, K_Love (701) writes:
Speechless work.. beautiful words. This was amazing. Lovely way of putting it. Well done


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (589) writes:
damn, I left a really good comment but the page decided not to respond :|, this is another awesome write six boy, I'll take fragments of this with me. . . your words, are drenched with beauty. wonderful :)


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, frozen (756) writes:
The imagery is astounding. I wish I knew where your mind and heart were at the moment you wrote this.


On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, tears of decadence (225) writes:
stoned


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (877) writes:
Thought-provoking...The peculiar feeling I get when I read this means I'll most definatly revisit it...Haunting...


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, stormtalk (915) writes:
Manual spinal taps and soul coolatas... this is like a party in my nightmares.


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, elisa (1981) writes:
writing poetry is similar to slowly bleeding to death....be it dripped in ink or stacked in bits this is beautifully written:) elisa


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, flying_fox (801) writes:
Great work Sixy... you have a talent for taking words which could potentially sound glib or cliched as absolutely meaningful and new. ANd that is very clever indeed. *applauds*


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, Lydia Jade (796) writes:
no it is deffinetly deep it makes me think alot...it kinda hurts


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, Choronzon (238) writes:
It sounds awesome. I will answer later when I'm in a different mental state.


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, tears of decadence (225) writes:
this was amazing, with a bit of a sinister feel to it, it created a masterful illusion within. "and you bleed of my pain. as I rip you to [shreds] with an image of what.could've.been-" such passion bleeding through words. *tears*



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