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sometimes you have to- rip yourself. to.[pieces]
to see who/you really..._are

'a man once told me. this one time, to tear apart who I am-
and in the cracks/ shattered foundations, I will find truth.
he told me. just me. that we all know- who we really are-
without knowing who.we.are- really.'

so I took a knife. in the shape of a pen- and ripped out my heart
blood flowed as ink- and the world could see me- as I've never seen me
and my life became my canvas. catching tears turned to lead
as my hands spread my blood across the face. of nostalgia
and created a masterpiece- life.as.art


I took my words. and tore out my soul- set forth in the form of poetry
raw. as all inhibitions were left behind/ and I never looked back
because you can't learn from the past. only see where you failed
and failure- is to regret. and I don't regret it at all.

-this man told me once. that when you [tear] apart your being
you are being true to yourself. and yourself is all you have.

I sometimes- wonder. if anyone ever told this man- not to pull to hard
because sometimes. when you rip apart who you are- it's hard
to piece it back together.


and sometimes. the pieces get broken- and then you're stuck
cracked- and alone. with nothing but yourself.



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On Monday March 24th, 2008, Dysphoria (163) writes:
When you tear yourself apart to figure out who you are, sometimes it leaves you worse off...There are somethings best left in the cracks because once you take them out they don't always fit back in place and then your left broken...and you did a beautiful job of conveying that in this poem.. I fucking loved it, as always.


On Wednesday June 8th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:
I'm in aw. Your talent is more then spectacular, it's unbelievable. This was perhaps one of my absolute favorite works from anyone. I'm.. actually speechless.


On Sunday January 16th, 2005, fucken_ke_ke (8) writes:
"and the world could see me- as I've never seen me and my life became my canvas." i love this line. this piece paints a picture so vividly in your mind. its great. it really is.


On Saturday January 15th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
in-fucken-credible. im amazed...dumbfounded...losin my head and articulation ability...this just blew me the fuck away. amazing write...


On Tuesday November 30th, 2004, stormtalk (884) writes:
"I know the pieces fit/ Cause I watched them fall away..." this makes me sing Tool's Schism to myself... always a good sign


On Friday November 26th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
A-fucking-MEN! holy shit...i cant talk. i cant speak. i cant say a fucking word. however you want to say it...im not the one talking. this ruled my world. you stand upon my heart with you poetic crown and diamond encrusted mind.


On Friday November 26th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
reigning your beauty...shedding the light of your talent. and i wouldnt have any nother way. your so incredible six.


On Friday November 26th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:
ignore my typos and such...im shaking. this is too much...


On Friday November 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (45) writes:
your an awesome writer...this is such a touching and truthful write...great job!


On Friday November 26th, 2004, glasshouse (780) writes:
*can't help but press the favs button* brilliant. -Glass


On Friday November 26th, 2004, frozen (741) writes:
This is an amazing graphic piece saying stuff I have longed to write forever you are such an amzing poet.


On Friday November 26th, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (228) writes:
Dead on truth. Awesome work Six.


On Friday November 26th, 2004, Urban Shipwreck (980) writes:
Holy fucking shit Jon. This was great, I really like the first stanza and the last two. Boy can I relate to this. Your ninja skills are superior, hya ~Ryan


On Friday November 26th, 2004, An Expired Member (61) writes:
awesome!! this was so honest and beautiful!!


On Friday November 26th, 2004, Lydia Jade (784) writes:
That is so fucking honest and billiant and beautiful..~bows to you~...you are the master


On Friday November 26th, 2004, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
you are constantly and consistently brilliant and profound. thats redundant and it repeats itself, but its true and valid. (what i said, not your poem)


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (583) writes:
I am stunned completely breathless.. this piece left me gripping for something that is there in my mind, that I want.. but I cant have. in all I've read of you, you have never failed to amaze me.. you are truly talented jon.. great work..


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (9) writes:
wow!! this piece is very beautiful


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:
I felt this in the pit of my stomach...a bullet to the gut.


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, sIo (872) writes:
i'll be there to piece you back together when you've lost yourself.


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:
ou speak the truth so elegantly Jon...Wonderfull write. Kya


On Thursday November 25th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:
**you



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