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torn pages of persuasion [longing for the cure]

hell.o - my empty /dreams
it.s good to see you.re still broken

t.i.m-e heals _no wounds/ simply:
paints over the scratches- and hopes no one looks too close
or they.ll see the- [fault lines] of hope
.or what once could have been perceived as such

gentle_melancholia - pro-rated to a tomorrow of lost desire
as .ink. runs down a ;white page of romance

[this] is me- and it.s too much
.-because I just can.t take it

when two/morrow fin.ally comes
look for -me. that figment of your imagination
in the corners of your mind

may.be I.ll be there

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On Wednesday October 20th, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

Each time I read this, it still reads the same...you appear as fragmented as this is is typed. It's saddening.

On Sunday October 17th, 2004, indefined (684) writes:

farking awesome, awesome! i have such a strong relation to this peice. insta-fav . *does a fuck yeah dance*

On Wednesday October 13th, 2004, Evil (547) writes:

this is sad. and gorgious in its own way. you pixilated pain and gave it your all, and it came out so... so... fuck i cant even find the words to describe how beautiful this is, as i say with all of your work. this is why i choose to adore you. *huggles*

On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, Whisper (136) writes:

I have nothing to say. ~Whisper~

On Tuesday October 12th, 2004, Twilight (2097) writes:

you will be there.

On Monday October 11th, 2004, Raven (373) writes:

*speechless*

On Monday October 11th, 2004, Raven (373) writes:

(quite honestly.. speechless.... your metaphors steal my breath)

On Monday October 11th, 2004, Ravenblade (274) writes:

amazing six, I always look for new stuff by you, and you never let me down, awesome job as usual....I loved the first stanza the best...>Raven<

On Monday October 11th, 2004, Dommi (122) writes:

I don't think I've identified so well with any of your other works, but this also breaks my heart to read. There are hundreds of cliche comments I can place here, but all I can say is I want things to get better for you, no more, no less. <3Dommi

On Monday October 11th, 2004, suicideseason (2128) writes:

_you have a destinct style that forces one to break out with the magnifying glass to inspect each word as it relates to the sum.but it doesn't take a rhodes scholar to see that there is alot of pain subtly wrapped around this piece.

On Monday October 11th, 2004, Choronzon (226) writes:

I really like this a lot. Cool punctuation and just awesome poem all around.

On Monday October 11th, 2004, Angst Queen (470) writes:

i am ashamed to say i've never actually read your work before but...i should smack myself for not reading it. I'm deeply impressed

On Monday October 11th, 2004, DoctorAsh (505) writes:

impressive - paints over the scratches- or they.ll see the- [fault lines] of hope - lemmie say that this is the closest i've come to your works mr. outsix. poetry in it's most powerful transparent form. I marvle. [D&A]

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