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All Apologies (Look Mom, I'm Dead)

Well, it looks as if
I've hit the end of my road
I've explored all options
and there's nowhere left to go
I can't go on
in this crazy life I live
Mom hates me, and
Dad doesn't give a SHIT
Maybe after I let
this blade go into my vein
They'll see the hurt
they'll feel my pain

You hear me now?
do you see my tears?
Can you take away
these aching fears?
Can you guide me out
of this maze of life?
I ask this of you
my blade, my knife
Pierce my vein
I ask, I plead
release this pain
as they watch me bleed

Hey mom, hey dad
did you FUCKING think
I would take your SHIT
I would clean the sink
I would wash my hair
and take out the trash
Don't you see the hurt
you cause, it's so bad
You make me wish
that I was dead
as I hold this gun
to my head
and feel the cold
I can see death
I write these words
with my last breath

Hey god you BITCH
you FUCKING CUNT
you gave me a life
that I couldn't run
It's not my fault
that I'm too weak
It's all your fault
now watch me BLEED!
watch me destroy
this art of yours
but I'm not art
I'm life's dirty WHORE

Now I leave you all
with this, my pain
the last words in this life
I've lived in vain
no more hurt
no more tomorrow
I've prayed for this day
to end all of this sorrow
as I lament the wrongs
that I have had
I bet no one cries
they won't even be sad

No more hate
no more pain
no more tears
almost to the vein
goodbye cruel world
goodbye for good
tonight it ends
like it really should
so now it's done
it all begins to fade
tomorrow has died
on the face of today

P.S. :: Dave, I know what you did, it's your fault. I hate you.

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On Tuesday October 14th, 2008, Scarrzz (144) writes:

Maybe it would be good if you could just open up and say what you really think/feel Six.... Oh wait, you did.............That was raw.

On Thursday September 25th, 2008, Six-Out (1820) writes:

I've decided that this is my contest entry.

On Friday October 10th, 2008, carlosjackal (1721) writes:

Not shit enough. Try again.

On Sunday October 21st, 2007, Distorted_Reality (131) writes:

I love it =) p.s. it's not cheesy!

On Tuesday June 19th, 2007, OttOEviL (90) writes:

some of the most intense shit i have read!! Otto

On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, An Expired Member (3) writes:

i like this one... girst one of your i have read, actually... i think i might be persuaded to continue reading you stuff... hmmm ::Thinks on it:: maybe... *~` red heart `~*

On Sunday November 21st, 2004, Armand (70) writes:

thank you for this piece without which there wouldnt have been the most hilarious comments i have ever seen on a single post. now please take down the post but leave the comments.

On Tuesday September 7th, 2004, Daemonicus (636) writes:

this is great six... you have the gift of sharp wit. rhyming and its shifts were great, same for overall flow and progression, insight brilliant... from both angles :)

On Saturday September 4th, 2004, Butterfly (122) writes:

wow this really hit home. Awesome work. Speechless...

On Thursday August 5th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:

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On Thursday August 5th, 2004, Nadir (615) writes:

Im behind you Six ... give me her phone number ... bring her on I say!

On Monday June 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

..And by the way: this is scaring me off. My biologic father's called: David. It's nearly to my world..

On Monday June 28th, 2004, An Expired Member (16) writes:

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On Friday June 25th, 2004, An Expired Member (3) writes:

Some people are just to lazy. Taking out the trash, haha.

On Friday June 25th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:

to long to read, it sucks

On Friday June 25th, 2004, Clementine (153) writes:

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On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, sole (114) writes:

No human being should ever have to be subjected to taking out the trash, how fucking degrading. I understand your plight, next time mom asks me to do it, I'm gonna kill myself, that'll show her.

On Monday May 31st, 2004, glasshouse (780) writes:

And then I died... right? -Glass

On Thursday May 27th, 2004, flying_fox (766) writes:

you are one sick puppy Six. Evidently I am sicker cos damn I laughed. The title in itself is very humourous. NOW GO AND WASH YOUR HAIR YOU FILTHY HIPPY.

On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:

*speechless*...WOW...uhhhh...LOVE IT is too mainstream...Bleh...indescribable Kya

On Wednesday May 26th, 2004, finaldestiny (98) writes:

six, this is fuckin AMAZING. thats all i gotta say. ~Finaldestny~

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

Bad ass piece MR SIX... if its all too real then I've got a message of my own 4 you... Your power is in taking responsibility... Your power is in your word and your integrity to that word...

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

Your power is in acceptance and in realizing what you cannot change and what you can...

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Mr King (623) writes:

You are an Immaculate Conception... You are Always Free... I have A New Love for YOU... ONELOVE1peopleWONPEACE, Seth

On Saturday May 22nd, 2004, Dommi (122) writes:

"Hey mom, hey dad..did you FUCKING think..I would take your SHIT..I would clean the sink..I would wash my hair..and take out the trash.." , these lines set a different tone, and it was rather funny.. hehe silly Sexi :-P <3Dommi

On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, aXe FactoR (426) writes:

charged with anger and emotions. flows so well. a very enjoyable read. :)

On Wednesday May 19th, 2004, Six-Out (1820) writes:

Actually, it was dripping with sarcasmn, and had no emotion what so ever in it. :)

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:

I like the way you CAPITIALISED the "vulgar" words. I like the way you wrote this poem ... it makes me laugh ::laughes::.

On Monday May 17th, 2004, CarpeDiemJane (42) writes:

wow. this is def the place i've been for a while. a def slap **hug**

On Monday May 17th, 2004, Seraphic (289) writes:

Oh my god Six, thank you for writing this, it made me feel like I'm not alone. And you aren't either, I'm here if you need someone to talk to. *slaps you* haha you're wicked...but so funny. Here, use my knife, it'd make a cool souvenier *~seraph~*

On Monday May 17th, 2004, Alanarchy (1696) writes:

*Scowers for no reason and then takes out the trash.*

On Monday May 17th, 2004, DoctorAsh (505) writes:

[I would clean the sink, I would wash my hair, and take out the trash, Don't you see the hurt, you cause, it's so bad].... thats fucking hilarious. *hands six a knife* nice. [D&A]

On Monday May 17th, 2004, Choronzon (226) writes:

Haha, a cutter poem by Six?

On Monday May 17th, 2004, Neith (29) writes:

very powerful piece..made me sit back and take a deep breath...~shy vampire

On Monday May 17th, 2004, Neith (29) writes:

and six my dear, you cant hate...you love EVERYONE! :)

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, Griffin (134) writes:

ha ha, its always daves fault

On Tuesday May 18th, 2004, Lemons (57) writes:

nope ... I blame Colin.

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, Mistress Morbid (593) writes:

Eeep!

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, TheProphetUntold (377) writes:

What? I am confused. Obviously this is not a serious work...I.. I am going to bed. Damn you six... +T.P.U+

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, evolve (2261) writes:

I don't know whether to label this as sarcastic or the some really melodramatic, horribly written goodbye. Whatever it is, know we love you.

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:

SIX NO, i didnt mean it, i'm serious, shit i cant think. fuck please dont, i'm cracking up, please, talk to me first i hope you read this

On Monday May 17th, 2004, Crystal Passion (257) writes:

you always hurt the ones you love davey

On Sunday May 16th, 2004, Bast (895) writes:

::laughs:: this makes me giggle. how DARE you make me take out the trash! slice slice bleed bleed.

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