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silver platters weren't meant for words.
so I learned never to speak of wisdom in heartbeats.
because murmurs spit toe lines.
and I can't tap dance on whispered thoughts.
drinking in offbeat patterns to a tune of a peace.
when i can't drink from this tide-
for fear of the salt water hitting the cuts on my tongue.
from when I chose to speak of heartache in wisdom.
while my hands are rough. and I think of
when money can't buy back the sleepless nights.
and the days I've just wasted on
opening my eyes- but not living.



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On Tuesday August 19th, 2008, Morbid_insanity (108) writes:
this is really interesting cuase i feel like im here, like still opening m eyes, and keeping myself from living. this was nice :)


On Tuesday August 5th, 2008, imfuckinloozinit (6) writes:
WOW!!!! HAVE YOU EVEN DROVE BY A GHETTO?????LOLOLLOL


On Wednesday July 23rd, 2008, Calypsos Lover (11) writes:
Six...write on my heart one day, luv, would you? Make it beautiful.


On Sunday June 15th, 2008, anth (1612) writes:
i know i like a poem, when i think of it on days my mind is clear of all thoughts, the ending of this especially, memorable, and meaning a lot to me


On Friday June 13th, 2008, urbanhumility (1352) writes:
profound and so very cold.........you have spoken well my friend..........urban


On Wednesday June 11th, 2008, palenoble (55) writes:
thanks


On Tuesday June 3rd, 2008, Jonas (867) writes:
the lines that brought together sleepless nights and days wasted hit home rather poignantly... your writing just gets better and better fellow wordsmith.


On Thursday May 29th, 2008, veingo (589) writes:
See, this is why I never leave you coments. What the hell could I say to this??? Bold lines, so well layed out. "The Salt water hitting the cuts in my tongue" I wish that was my line. ^V^


On Monday May 26th, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (693) writes:
"can't tap dance on whispered thoughts" - very cool image! Ciao, Steve


On Friday May 23rd, 2008, Fantecstasy (85) writes:
You took what I've been looking for, for a long while, and wrote it here. I don't know what else to say. *tips hat*


On Friday May 23rd, 2008, Rebell tiGer King (679) writes:
this made me think, maybe inspired by all that overtime and realizing how little we live even though we are alive, well done brother -symph-


On Friday May 23rd, 2008, NikesRain (1503) writes:
i clicked without looking who this was by but somehow within the first lines i knew it was you... and as always the lines are effective and run themselves deep with what they create emotionally and mentally... *hugs*


On Friday May 23rd, 2008, Caliraphy (260) writes:
*sighs*



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