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when we parted
the skies were singing thunderstorm
operas. dressed in tidal waves- my fingers twitched
to the sound of her eyelids closing
on my shoulder.

and I am. fixation mounted on eyeglass.
testing cool water with the taste
of fire tongues and cocaine eyes.

and the rain.
it's pounding on my face. like pellets
of sand- the glass is protruding from my shirt pocket
and my heart is a few beats short of
a landslide. so I break breath like past tense jesus
but I'm splitting sand blowers
my rib cage could use a little painting.


and red. just isn't my color.



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On Thursday March 13th, 2008, anth (1622) writes:
inbetween each pause , a feeling of epic quiet, its quite exhillerating to take in,


On Monday March 3rd, 2008, Astra Dei (649) writes:
this was lovely. you painted the moment well


On Sunday March 2nd, 2008, dying angel (1374) writes:
"my fingers twitched to the sound of her eyelids closing on my shoulder." my heart stopped right after reading those lines. you'll never lose your touch.


On Friday February 29th, 2008, saintedmad (994) writes:
gutteral and piercing; the splitted. spitted syntax and symbolism is superb. ..blessings~


On Friday February 29th, 2008, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
Bastard. I've been putting this off for a very long time..


On Friday February 29th, 2008, Geisha (817) writes:
Damn perfect.


On Friday February 29th, 2008, purr_verse (1483) writes:
Excellent imagery here, and I love the distantly-analytical-yet-not conclusion...if that makes sense, which it may well not. Hmm. Despite my inability to express it properly, this is a great piece.


On Friday February 29th, 2008, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:
perfect. just perfect.



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