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city.park [at sundown]

.take.

.takethepowerback.
we scream like gods in the sea.
the taste of opium in the air
like soma stars and an urge
to rage.

and I know I'm not a saint
in this pit. - like a bullet in the head
I'm drifting. feet from the ground.
tonight.

I feel.

and they chant. [fuckyou]
as we jump for ourselves- and bleed
our souls. one.more.time.

feed this instance.
and

worship-
the music.

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On Wednesday January 9th, 2008, Astra Dei (645) writes:

nice little tribute to the Rage.

On Saturday December 22nd, 2007, italianbella (297) writes:

you write with so much power in everything you write about so much strength and emotion in everything ive read of youres so far you are truely an amazing writer

On Tuesday December 11th, 2007, capt_funguy (999) writes:

i saw them at an outdor venue also ... they blew my brains out ... this was the most pleasant reminder .. thanks man ... great piece .. funguy

On Sunday November 11th, 2007, An Expired Member (2) writes:

You inspire me to want to L-E-A-R-N to write. Teach me?

On Sunday November 11th, 2007, PoeticHellion (250) writes:

marry me?

On Friday November 2nd, 2007, Instant Insanity (755) writes:

wow quite a different turn then expected from the title. The first stanza really caught my eye. The Smell of Opium in the Air. My body wen through a withdraw when I read those words and I smelt the faint smell. Live on...Rock On...Worship Music???? ][ ][

On Sunday October 28th, 2007, Zen (631) writes:

nice.

On Saturday October 27th, 2007, Lynaes (1129) writes:

"We scream like gods in the sea." What I like about this is that is has power behind it, in so few words. Nice work.

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