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"Baby, you're driving me crazy... (With Six-Out)" by Elegant Kiss

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these stars. they're beautiful.

120 on 60 - on our way to nowhere.
and we may never make it. but I don't think either of us care.
singing songs of ultimate despair- we're broken
a little. all of us on the inside.
like the crack on my windshield. and you smile.
you almost make me want to live
holding my hand as our world is here. tonight. now.
this is our forever, babe.

sending smoke signals to each other
counting the blues in the horizon- wondering just if
it'd be worth turning back.
your hand clinching tighter. this is life.
and we will not die alone.

pulse. beating a little faster. tell me you love me.
pushing my foot a little harder- speed is our ally.
our breaths caught in unison.
wait for it.

[blinded]

forever.is.now
we're so utterly lost that it's beautiful

Quiet, baby.

Listen to the road, Mister.

Play our song,
You know the one.
I'll hum it for you.

Surely, you won't mind
if I grasp your hand tighter..

We're lost
without a care...
bouncing to the flap of our wings,
and the wind in our hair.

You always liked the metal
beneath your foot
as you lead me to our forever.

I believe.
I know it's silly.
But I believe,
cause everything wrong with you,
I like.

And when you're dangerous,
I'll sing it to you good,
i want my lullabies
to be the last thing to kiss your beautiful mouth.

Away from those poor creatures.
I'm nobody's fool, least of all theirs.
But tonight, I'll be your fool
if you tell me you love me.

So drive me to forever,
you were always the one that made
me realize how life is
and not how it should be.

I'm dashed
and feeling how I should feel.

I'll tug harder on your palm,
Show me your charm, darling.

You're my ticket to lost,
Don't you forget it.
I'm beside you and
holding on tight.

120 on 60 - our way to nowhere.
You're a lot of trouble
and you're driving me crazy...

I feel much better now.


-kiss.me.goodnight- with your words.
this is life. and we'll live forever babe

[crumble]
like the rubble of this car when we're done
they'd tell us we're crazy- darlin'
if they knew the truth.
they'd tell us we're going nowhere
when nowhere is our plan.

nowhere is you. riding shotgun
lock eyes with me.

Shake me, baby.
Real crazy.
I'm certainly not afraid.
The worlds in an awful mess,
and we're never looking back.

A deep breath as we plunge,
suddenly I know
I couldn't possibly die without you.

Oh, everywhere is you. Driving mad,
Cover your eyes.


There aren't any stars...

We don't need them anymore.





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On Wednesday May 7th, 2008, Circe Avalon (183) writes:
I actually cried.....I'm SO lame! I loved it it quite literally brought tears to my eyes.


On Friday September 28th, 2007, Instant Insanity (754) writes:
"i want my lullabies to be the last thing to kiss your beautiful mouth." Breathtaking. A few good metaphores but, it seemed like it dragged on. ][ ][


On Tuesday September 25th, 2007, Skarlet Rebell Queen (208) writes:
i read this every damn day!:)


On Thursday April 5th, 2007, An Expired Member (43) writes:
Oh I loved this very very much. it was incredible and perfect in my eyes:] this goes to favs without question.


On Tuesday May 9th, 2006, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
Mmmm. Brilliant. Your styles just collide perfectly. The underlying story draws you in... and makes me want to read it over and over again.


On Monday May 8th, 2006, Zen (629) writes:
of course we need the stars.psh. no just kidding this was great.


On Tuesday February 7th, 2006, Alanarchy (1599) writes:
This reminds me so much of that Def tones song with Maynard. *Roll the windows down, this cool night air is curious. Let the whole world look in, who cares who sees what tonight* You guys make quite a team.


On Tuesday June 12th, 2007, carlosjackal (1658) writes:
The Passenger! Obviously not the Iggy Pop song..


On Thursday January 12th, 2006, An Expired Member (2) writes:
how can you possibly respond with words to a poem like that. . .i think i fell in love with both of you reading this poem...thank you for writing this!


On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, BeautifulCalamity (586) writes:
I agree with drea, mindblowing unison. wow.. *faves* .. this was just incredible. flawless.. i'm in love with this piece..


On Friday October 14th, 2005, Drea (934) writes:
I wish I had words for this. I'm lost in between the lines. You both are amazingly talented on your own, but together...it's mind blowing. Perfect. Nothing less then...perfect.


On Friday October 14th, 2005, anth (1611) writes:
i love the expressions this poem represents and the flawless way in which its done, the kind of poem that could only ever be as a collab i cant think of how to say it, the two against the world kinda thing,


On Friday October 14th, 2005, anth (1611) writes:
but more elegant than that, like everything that surrounds you being grey in comparison to what you make it, and in this poem the energy that it has, just brilliant


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1072) writes:
*Sways as her mind explodes on the beauty of your piece* This is so very enchanting...every word drew me closer to my computer screen...I'm worried that if I back up now, I'll be blinded for life. Wonderful job you two...amazing piece. *Evangel*


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (989) writes:
"So drive me to forever, you were always the one that made me realize how life is and not how it should be." This was smooth and the last four lines. Wow. Very well done guys. ~Ship!


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, ApathysKiss (463) writes:
lovely. this was wind in my hair...reminds me of that romantic movie, delinquents...with the carefree undertone...almost sing-song like...


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, stuart_pid (217) writes:
this is one of the more fluid collaborations i have seen. your styles are different but the pace and passion never breaks between the two of you which works to an unusual and exciting effect.


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Six-Out (1823) writes:
We don't need them, but we love them. Perfection in words is our end. You're lovely Amy. :)


On Thursday October 13th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (319) writes:
*breathesmiles* You're the lovely one. Thank you, my sweet Jon. I'm absolutely honoured and glowing. xoxo.



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