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"Shake that ass, girl." by Elegant Kiss

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Drama dolls,
consulting
blurry mirrors,
before the sounds of
drunken singing..

Cares of the world
slip away
Idle,
precisely.

Suddenly a beat.
Smile as I please.

Light reds and darks,
Sweaty faces
and
giggling girls
holding onto
other's sleeves.

Don't
bother
the beauty with
your ridiculous lines..
Going home with you,
I am not.

You won't overlook
the way my hips
sway when I know
you're watching.

Men are simply ignorant
Of the subtle paradise
In my thigh heavens.

Upbeat hooks,
bodies
sway.
shadows
play.
epileptic motions.

She's stupid promiscuous,
Clothes
beer-soaked.
hand-stroked.
Staggers
and loses
track
in his car.

There's one causing trauma
in the corner.

Another praying with her
lips for attention.

But me,
If you're looking for me,


I'll be on that dance floor..

Shake that ass, girl.





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On Tuesday February 7th, 2006, Alanarchy (1694) writes:
YES. FREAKING AWESOME.


On Wednesday August 31st, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (464) writes:
I so want to see you dance.


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, blue (1741) writes:
Rap sucks!!


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (317) writes:
bleh.


On Monday August 29th, 2005, blue (1741) writes:
..but the theme song for Danger Kitty rocks!! oh and by the way.. shut up yo' face lady!


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, Evil (547) writes:
haha. this was awesome. i totally agree.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (552) writes:
"Men are simply ignorant Of the subtle paradise In my thigh heavens." smiles all around


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, James_the_Saint (132) writes:
Oh yes, I feel it. Heh, that's great.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, SamoneDrone (407) writes:
I have to say that I really liked this poem, it was rather sultry, however I feel like the last line didn't quite fit it. But that's just my opinion. Other than that I loved it. ....-samone


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (317) writes:
Aha, Thank you. I wrote this in my head when I was dancing at a club to 50 Cent's "Disco Inferno"..


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (317) writes:
"lil' mama show me how you move it, go ahead put ya back into it, do ya thang like there aint nothin to it, Shake.. shake.. shake that ass, girl." Thus the last line and title. ;)


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, elisa (2017) writes:
lol...i was singing that while commenting......good to hear it wasn't just me;)


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, elisa (2017) writes:
Shake'n da azz is fun....screw the gawkers....not everything is meant to seduce:)


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, PoeticHellion (250) writes:
Awesome. It was very... insightful but in a loud way. I'm not sure what it is, but I liked it.


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, lollipoplips (110) writes:
awesome sahit.....keep shakin' that ass, girl!


On Saturday August 27th, 2005, alone (199) writes:
thats fucking awsome great write!


On Sunday August 28th, 2005, Anth (1611) writes:
i loved the descriptions in this*holding onto each others sleeve* this was a very cool write:)



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