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"The concentric circles of a finger..." by Elegant Kiss

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A sliver of my lung
swells up
like a mass of stars..

and spreads..

evaporates into the air...



in search of your breath.



You
are a grenade.

Courting danger
on my
Heart's

great

..stairs...




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On Sunday August 28th, 2005, urbanhumility (1377) writes:
regal and intelligent conscription of prose.........wisdom and strife distilled for my understanding............urban


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, Evil (547) writes:
im afraid i dont have the capacity to leave you a good comment. but i read this about 5 times and still cant take my eyes off of it.


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, Anth (1609) writes:
i held my breath as i read, and i cant stop re reading it


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
beautifully woven....as always, you have sewn together a tapestry of magnificence with your words. so intertwined with a depth far and wide.you never cease, you simply just never cease to amaze and inspire me.


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (468) writes:
this is great writing... stretched my mind in different directions... definitely worth rereading a few times...


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, stuart_pid (217) writes:
you are the master of metaphors, and i am merely a slave to your creativity. beautiful as always.


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, Solace (1421) writes:
This is beautiful, like a zen garden, so soft and lush but each word is like an arrow - sharp and concise...


On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, Possesion (189) writes:
Very short, but not simple, one to read more then once, very good.



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