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In a minute I experience the colour red..

Like writing our names and a heart
in spilt coffee..

I don't love you.

I do not know about "love."

With vomits of never,
and forever is a made up word.

I certainly "love" my cigarettes..
but I can't seem to view you as one of them.

I surely "love" my music,
but even you escape the limits of it's soul breathing.

No.. I do not love you.

You are a clean mirror,
with lips as wounds,
and a sharp tongue
that knocks me down at times.

Shiny and beautiful,
but that's not why I do not love you.

I do not love you because I picture you in the morning,
in a perfect state,
devoid of responsibility,
with a faint splash of sunlight across your chest,
etched up into your neck
as if god were Monet.

I do not love you because of the art you possess
when lifting your shirt over your head.

I do not love you because you're entirely too brilliant for your own good..

and i'm merely an idiot lover,
clitoris image,
of a woman
that leaves the last bite of my dessert untouched..

for elegance's sake.


Difficult as morning,
but damnit,
bless my little cotton socks
for supporting me as i tip toe to you.

Tip toe
in a stretch of sixty seconds..
to hear your voice and say
"hey you...
I just called to say hi."

my heart is:
a poverty stricken ghetto.
a bed that's never been slept in.
a rose never picked.

"i won't keep you,
I dreamed you were a poem..
I just wanted to say I [don't]love you."

my heart is
an insect
struggling with the last flutter of my wing
breathing my last gasp of stale air


pinned.
to.
a.
specimen.
board.

except in that minute.
that minute before the world begins again.

This is you.

This is i.

This means I love you.



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On Monday February 11th, 2008, An Expired Member (10) writes:
Love it ^_^


On Thursday January 24th, 2008, blue (1779) writes:
Amy Amy Amy


On Thursday January 24th, 2008, Esau (281) writes:
well that puts me back into a "do i/don't i" position. very beautiful piece.


On Monday January 7th, 2008, An Expired Member (50) writes:
so beautiful... i can relate :).... great write -mars


On Thursday November 15th, 2007, slow.burn.star (95) writes:
xxx


On Sunday October 28th, 2007, Lynaes (1148) writes:
Come back, please. I miss you and your words.


On Thursday September 20th, 2007, An Expired Member (13) writes:
simply beautiful...


On Sunday July 8th, 2007, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
Just perfect. *:)* *out of bookmarks* :( -Carl


On Wednesday August 22nd, 2007, carlosjackal (1598) writes:
Got that fixed! ;)


On Sunday July 8th, 2007, asphyxia (79) writes:
first time reading this. don't even have words, but i know i will read it over and over and over again.


On Friday March 30th, 2007, An Expired Member (44) writes:
very beautiful


On Thursday March 15th, 2007, An Expired Member (14) writes:
"Like writing our names and a heart in spilt coffee.." my favorite line. i love this.


On Thursday March 15th, 2007, Dark Nymph (76) writes:
I'm speechless. Its fantastic. Truly a masterpiece


On Sunday November 12th, 2006, darth ren (40) writes:
w o w..... nothing more great write.


On Thursday May 18th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (1061) writes:
This Amy, reminds me of the very second between that silence and when you hear those fated 3 words. "I love you." Because you're afraid you may be dreaming, and do not wanna wake up. Amazing hun, freakin amazing! Julia~


On Sunday April 30th, 2006, Zen (657) writes:
i dont know what to say? im still comprehending


On Tuesday January 24th, 2006, Guillotine (232) writes:
grasping... fills me with the sound of angry white noise but also waves on a seashore...


On Friday December 9th, 2005, glasshouse (812) writes:
Taking a trip back through my Favs before I leave and I must say... this catches my breath every time that I read it. It is so perfectly intentional. I adore the way you write, have from the beginning. You are a lovely talent. --Glass


On Monday November 14th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (408) writes:
i bookmarked this as a fav, but I can't do it justice in a comment as I"m so tired tonight, but it moved me, gripped me and calls to me.


On Tuesday October 25th, 2005, Army Barbie (501) writes:
Let me be one of the many who bask pitifully in the shadow of your existance. I can't even comment right now. This...this is a beautiful beautiful piece of art. Like many, I must fave it.


On Friday October 21st, 2005, Anna Helianthus (1165) writes:
this is amazingly beautiful. must fave it.


On Monday September 12th, 2005, Bellezza (26) writes:
This is so emotional. "image, of a woman that leaves the last bite of my dessert untouched.. for elegance's sake." I love those lines. Beautiful.


On Sunday September 11th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:
This inspires me, and is by far my favorite poem right now... thank you for your beautiful words


On Saturday September 10th, 2005, vaultgrl (239) writes:
every word swept across my mind like a a beautiful breeze on a scorching day...appearing suddenly and gone before I can truely express my appreciation...beautifully written!!


On Sunday September 4th, 2005, Tangle Box Tales (169) writes:
Visions pacing in proximity and yet fading; you draw fading worlds that will be tempered and will last. It took me a while to figure out what I wanted to say on this, imagining the ways carried in the tempo and the subtextual meanings, and I only got so f


On Sunday September 4th, 2005, Tangle Box Tales (169) writes:
I only got so far as "moving." Sometimes a simply word tries to be bigger than the worlds bridged.


On Wednesday August 31st, 2005, saellem (27) writes:
i love your work you can always write so beautifuly


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, stuart_pid (217) writes:
i love my cigarettes too. i keep them in my breast pocket so they can be close to my heart. and so they dont get crushed when i sit down. but enough about my cigarettes. this poem, once again, knocked me on my ass. you were right when you called me a bast


On Thursday August 25th, 2005, stuart_pid (217) writes:
*bastard. i should have read this a long time ago.


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (1002) writes:
Wow very heavy in a way I can appreciate. Cool thought process, beautiful write ~Ship!


On Saturday August 20th, 2005, glasshouse (812) writes:
oh... wow. I am... shocked. Breathless. So beautiful. It was real and sincere and still so gorgeous. Fluid. *Favs* This was an honor to read. -Glass


On Saturday August 20th, 2005, braindead_poet (585) writes:
....i like you :)


On Friday August 19th, 2005, blue (1779) writes:
Just stop would ya?!? Who does that? I mean really, who does that? Fuck you.


On Friday August 19th, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (477) writes:
I want to have this written somewhere, like in the back of my notebook. Somewhere no one else can see it.. it seems to me this piece almost asks to be kep secret - But so I can read it every day.


On Sunday August 21st, 2005, blue (1779) writes:
silly girl, chyu :)


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Jay Jii (337) writes:
Macabre images that swirled within my brain like the breath of a sultry tornado. Beautiful work.


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Evil (551) writes:
i wish i could just experience this again.. bliss before my cup of coffee in the morning.. and right before bed. this is beautiful. everything i've ever felt for another person summed up in your beautiful words. you are inspiring.


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Drea (976) writes:
I couldn't think of a word(s) to sum up what this made me feel. This touched me and broke me in a way I can't describe. Just know that I fell in love with this.


On Friday August 19th, 2005, Drea (976) writes:
I added a link to this through my profile. I hope you don't mind.


On Friday August 19th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (302) writes:
Don't be silly.. I'm beyond honoured. Thank you.


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, sIo (896) writes:
the only thing i can do is show the whole world my admiration for this peace.


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Solace (1420) writes:
A strangely touching piece...forgive the lack of discussion on my part on this...but this was beautiful in its own strange way...


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (329) writes:
I am utterly stunned. This was breath taking. Very well done. Every line was amazing. -Kitty


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (344) writes:
this was beautiful..."I do not love you because you're entirely too brilliant for your own good../and i'm merely an idiot lover"...great line, somehow..-l-


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Bridge (346) writes:
i want to comment but i can't..this is beyond words


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, An Expired Member (49) writes:
lovely, beautiful, miraculous, loved every bit of it


On Thursday August 18th, 2005, Six-Out (1832) writes:
Damn. I was breathless through the entire thing, and the ending knocked me dead. Brilliance doesn't touch what you create, but it's the only word that I can think of that comes close. So this was brilliant.



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