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Anti-inversal thoughts

I'm shivering
But i'm burning up
I'm alive
But i'm dying inside
I listen
But i don't hear
I touch you
But i don't feel
I love you
But i don't want to
I'm a poet
But i've forgotten the words
I'm making promises
But i can't keep them
I'm building walls
But i don't know what i'm trying to keep out
Then it hits me
Pow
Like a smack in the face
I'm afraid of the truth
I'm afraid of the world
I'm afriad of everything
But i don't know why
All i know is that i'm lost
But i know exactly where i am

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On Thursday May 26th, 2005, Dysphoria (163) writes:

nice write, i like it

On Sunday May 15th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:

Wow, that's amazing, and it completely says everything that I couldn't find the words for... Thank you.

On Sunday May 15th, 2005, An Expired Member (8) writes:

good one ..

On Sunday May 15th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (757) writes:

Fear... so... scary. lol.

On Saturday May 14th, 2005, DarkDruidess (196) writes:

oh yeah, I know this feeling... incredible way you choose to present this...I love it....

On Saturday May 14th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:

As so many can relate, I can join in that. Excellent work!

On Saturday May 14th, 2005, blue (1757) writes:

:) simple to the point! I enjoyed this very much.. ~b

On Saturday May 14th, 2005, Labitina (45) writes:

Wow, I relate to this, I like your phrasing, great write

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