DarkPoetry -|- Eladrim -|- My Angel

On a blood red thread you left my heart to dangle.

Blindly I descend into Hell to find you, my Angel.

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On Tuesday January 24th, 2006, Eladrim (61) writes:

The point is the contrast, One I thought was an Angel (typically a being of light, hope, and all around goodness) led me into Hell (typically a place of pain and torment)

On Friday January 13th, 2006, An Expired Member (4) writes:

don't mean to be an ass, but i see little potential in this. in fact, i feel like i just wasted almost a minute of my life...

On Thursday January 5th, 2006, An Expired Member (34) writes:

Different than your others. I'm not real religious but I don't like the stereotyping of hell.. meh. I love the first line though. - Salem

On Friday September 23rd, 2005, LiP Stiches (60) writes:

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow!..i....i...i....love this!

On Monday May 30th, 2005, Elise (263) writes:

Ouch, short and to the point. Blinded by love and lead into darkness.

On Monday May 30th, 2005, Eladrim (61) writes:

^_^ great to hear from you again

On Saturday May 28th, 2005, Labitina (45) writes:

even though it's just two lines it says a lot, great write ~ Christina

On Friday May 27th, 2005, NeverMore (12) writes:

Short and sweet

On Friday May 27th, 2005, Eladrim (61) writes:

thnx, i couldn't think of anything to go with it that i liked so i left it only two lines

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