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This is dedicated to Serenity ^_^
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I look around and all I see,
Are angry faces staring back at me.
These are my friends that I've hurt,
I can't believe how I treated them like dirt.
I said all the things I didn't mean,
Everything cruel, rude and obscene.
Time and time I get this way,
I can't control what I do or say.
So now I ask, "Why even try?"
As I gaze unseeing at the sky.
"Why fight who I am?
I try to resist but never can!
I scream in your face, 'I'll never bow!'
But the real question is how?
You see it's quite impossible for me,
Because the truth is i'm already on my knees..."



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On Thursday January 5th, 2006, An Expired Member (34) writes:
Wow. I love all but the treating like dirt. Sorry, I value dirt a lot, as a piece of nature, and it was also worth alot in trading times before money. Just doesn't fit, to me...


On Thursday January 5th, 2006, An Expired Member (34) writes:
Other than that I love it. I feel like this sometimes, and imagine one friend who might. Lovely as always. I much like it. -Salem


On Thursday May 19th, 2005, your_only_love (163) writes:
short but good... and the last line brought it out really well


On Saturday May 14th, 2005, Elise (263) writes:
Nice flow, that was well written ^_^ The last line seemed the strongest, a great way to end it.


On Friday May 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (12) writes:
WOW VERY POETIC AND DEEP I LIKE AWESOME WRITE!!!!!!!


On Friday May 13th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
awww!! thats so cute! i love how ppl dedicate poems to ppl..it so sweet..i'll have 2 try it :P anway..great write! -Kel


On Friday May 13th, 2005, An Expired Member (1) writes:
deep man... i like it


On Friday May 13th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:
Hehe ::Hugs tight:: :)


On Friday May 13th, 2005, Eladrim (61) writes:
::hugs back tighter::^_^



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