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A Life of Pain

All the walls are coming in,
You can see it can't you.
You can't find strength withing,
You look around and friends are few.

You fight but just can't win,
You always get shut down.
Your mind breaks, depression walks in,
You try but can no longer hide the frown.

They say that it's just part of life,
But you cannot admit it.
Because if pain is a part of life,
Then to escape the pain you must escape the life...

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On Thursday January 5th, 2006, An Expired Member (34) writes:

Again, beautful.. the last line may be seem true. it is true life is pain, but death is not the only way... From another angle, we also never remove all of the pain.. so it be true, sadly. I much like it. - Salem

On Sunday May 15th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:

"Because if pain is a part of life, Then to escape the pain you must escape the life..." I admit this haunts me a bit

On Monday May 9th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:

Wow! This is too awesome. Keep it up :)

On Monday May 9th, 2005, happilydepressed (213) writes:

true, keep up the good writes

On Monday May 9th, 2005, CrOsSeD N BoUnD (61) writes:

BA--ZING!!! you hit that on the spot!! pain is life? Genious! Great write... ~~~WELCOME TO DP~~~ -Roarke

On Monday May 9th, 2005, Eladrim (61) writes:

thank you for the welcome, yes i figured everybody can understand how life is pain, if not they're lying to themselves

On Monday May 9th, 2005, Elise (263) writes:

Wow, I like the rythm, but very nicely written. Welcome to DarkPoetry.

On Monday May 9th, 2005, Eladrim (61) writes:

Thank you, that's what I was attempting to convey

On Sunday May 8th, 2005, Eladrim (61) writes:

The Crimson Queen- trying to improve my writing, what thoughts does it provoke? (anyone know why it won't let me reply?)

On Monday May 9th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:

just that last line makes you think about life and pain and how so many try to escape but fail..ya know?

On Sunday May 8th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:

thought provoking piece..wonderful! and welcome to the DP family

On Sunday May 8th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:

Amen...pain Is life.

On Monday May 9th, 2005, VenomPlease (178) writes:

I'd say life is pain... but it's really all the same. This is a excellent piece I think. I find the ending to be as wonderfully sufficient as you probably hoped it would be.

On Monday May 9th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:

The last line states that to escape the pain,you must escape the life...The pain is the life.Thanx.

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