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"Perpetual Bliss" by peril_notion

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Please release me from my dreams
Eccentric pieces of shattered wishes
Rhetorical questions linger within
Playing a game with no determined rules
Every day I'm sinking lower
Trading my sanity for thoughts of maybe
Unsparing forces surround my mind
As my walls crumble around me
Lying faces laugh at my expense

Blinded by unattainable ambitions
Loitering at the edge of reality
Inspiration sapping me of life
Symbolic meanings dance around
Sweet anticipation curdles in my mind




Copyright 2005 Heather K. Burnett

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On Monday September 12th, 2005, evolve (2245) writes:
Mind-mirrored games. Inevitable. Lovely perception, my dear.


On Friday August 19th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:
intelligently and skillfully done...with some very nice lines ~kristy


On Wednesday August 3rd, 2005, indefined (713) writes:
i like how your mind works so far, clicks with mine. i'll have to peruse some more of your work.


On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, Spiritus_Frumenti (361) writes:
it is an acronym...i would never have guessed...-l-


On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, stormtalk (908) writes:
Interesting title, considering the content. I'm not sure I entirely understand what you're getting at, but there are many intriguing lines and good ideas... nice write, although a little more clarity couldn't hurt.


On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, peril_notion (123) writes:
It's an acronym....


On Tuesday August 2nd, 2005, stormtalk (908) writes:
Didn't catch that, nice work. The content's still a little obtuse, though.



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