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His kisses were like promises in the dark,
And in my heart he left his mark.

Still my soul he did not touch,
I did not love him but I wanted him very much.

Without love we would have nothing.
It pained him so that I would not accept his ring.

Even now that I am dead,
He comes to my grave wishing it were him instead.

Now I'm afraid it's my time to leave.
He swears for eternity he will grieve.

I do not trust promises made to unseen ears.
I fear there is no emotions in his pain and tears.



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On Monday November 12th, 2007, carlosjackal (1717) writes:
I really like the mystery evoked in this piece and the missing details of the story leaving the reader curious as to how this lady died. Excellent :) -Carl


On Monday June 20th, 2005, An Expired Member (26) writes:
awesome write


On Thursday June 9th, 2005, Reverend Machine (91) writes:
Insane, i enjoyed this peice very much, that concept of her listening in her grave while he crys though there are no emotions in his tears is magnificant, brilliant concept...-Dark


On Wednesday May 18th, 2005, ONEANDLONELY (137) writes:
To look back, beyond the grave, what will we see?


On Saturday April 30th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:
This is a very good write. I especially loved the last two lines. Nice Job.~Unlucky


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Serenity (598) writes:
Wow this is wonderful. Awesome write!


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, mysticventures (545) writes:
oh very good classical write - gonna keep this one :)


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, An Expired Member (3) writes:
i just got a question are u a guy or girl anyways another great poem thanx 4 sharing


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Lab Rat (325) writes:
memnoch's a devil....


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Lab Rat (325) writes:
well according to that writer lady memnoch is


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:
ahem...its anne rice


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Lab Rat (325) writes:
*cough*hack*cough* yeah....... her


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Lab Rat (325) writes:
Good write btw :)


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, Ashlar (258) writes:
Thank You


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, etarnally damnd (99) writes:
very good write i like it. -michael



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