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do you remember when i was ten
the world was so much better then
the grass smelt so much more alive
and at my will (imagionation) the heavens would divide
the tree's would cross there limbs to make a bed
for me to lay my peacefull (innocent) head

one saturday morn i watched the t.v
the last moment that your time was free
you sat next to me and spoke
i laughed at the sill joke
that song is imprinted on my mind
that kind of happiness is hard to find

six years to the day since my cousin died
i miss that day, i was so alive
i cried on your shoulder and you held me tight
dried my eyes and said "It'll be allright"
that was the last time i was in your arms
the last time i fealt safe from harm...

i leave in four days, do you even know?
you won't speek to mum, that just goes to show
how little i mean to you these days
ohh god how i miss the old ways
back when you used to laugh
back when you used to run my bath

i'm all grown up now, can't you see?
but still i'm eighteen going on three
there is only one thing i want from you
not much, something you could easily do
this one last thing, will you let me have?
please...

just hug me dad.



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On Wednesday November 21st, 2007, meadowlea (44) writes:
Still waiting for that hug, wishing he would speak to your mum, this is the one i was searching for, xxx


On Sunday July 22nd, 2007, An Expired Member (3) writes:
very cool :) i love it!!!


On Monday October 3rd, 2005, Dysphoria (169) writes:
oh jake..i think you're the only one who's poetry makes me cry..lovely write, it brings up feelings in me that i try to hide. -justina


On Saturday October 1st, 2005, Possesion (192) writes:
i now ache to hug you, though it wouldn't be the hug you need but a placement for two cents of comfort. Tugging on my heartstrings you sad boy, great write.


On Friday September 30th, 2005, Astra Dei (649) writes:
*omg.. that really made me cry. I feel this one close. kylee had it right, that last line wraps it all up and puts a bow on it


On Friday September 30th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:
..the last line..it was right there..but I was completely wrapped up in the ache of this, all of this..that I completely missed it..heartfelt and precious.


On Friday September 30th, 2005, Rone4611 (157) writes:
I love your style. Imagry was excellent and the, "but still i'm eighteen going on three." line really got me. Good Job


On Friday September 30th, 2005, An Expired Member (6) writes:
wow. um, wow. i love it. i know exactly how that is. i love the way this poem worked. the rhyme, the rythm,the tone. all worked out perfectly. i love it.



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