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""As Man Falls"" by Grim_Sorrow

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forgotten vows
embossed in blood
the scent of greed
the coming flood
no careless act
no selfless deed
the man reacts
withdraws
yet leads
behind the lies
this man
well kept
forgets his life
his heart
inlet
his dying eyes
lost hate
far gone,
to realize life
in self
was all


© 2006 Grim_Sorrow

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On Monday May 28th, 2007, unspeakable truth (144) writes:
So simple, and stunning. Flowed so well right till the end, and there is your title...


On Wednesday March 7th, 2007, Bella Butchery (1106) writes:
love how the structure seems to fit to the title, got to check you out more


On Monday January 15th, 2007, Sin (1623) writes:
short and concise...we are all we have in this world when it all comes down to it we all stand alone and faith in self is what makes us or breaks us ~kristy


On Saturday May 13th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (481) writes:
yes wowx3.. a refreshing strip of wisdom.. it reads like a scroll, something out of the Confucius era.


On Sunday April 30th, 2006, Fornever_Never (251) writes:
WOW ... thats all I can say short sweet and cutting ... I like it alot and very well worded


On Saturday April 29th, 2006, Collective Amnesia (234) writes:
i believe man has fallen....but few, are the ones who decide to get up...good write ~Tamara


On Saturday April 29th, 2006, mywristshurt (512) writes:
wow... well spoken..


On Saturday April 29th, 2006, The Fool (970) writes:
This was fantastic, I just breathed this work into my lungs:)


On Saturday April 29th, 2006, Nail Bunny (222) writes:
I am honored to be the first to comment on this most excellent work.



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