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Every time

I haven't felt lonely in a while
Because every time I was down
You were around,
And I was wearing your crown.

I haven't felt lovesick in a while
Because every time I felt lost
You were around,
No matter the cost.

I haven't felt wanted in a while
Because every time you were near
You left me alone
Ignoring my tears.

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On Monday December 4th, 2006, An Expired Member (2) writes:

yeah i agre with halfdarkangel

On Wednesday November 8th, 2006, HalfDarkAngel (93) writes:

whoa. so few words, yet so much was said

On Monday April 4th, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:

wow I don't say this very much but I loved it.

On Sunday April 3rd, 2005, DarkSoul (24) writes:

Welcome, my dear, to DP, and my favs list. This is such a beautiful write~DarkSoul

On Saturday April 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (15) writes:

this is really good.. I agree short but powerfull... Flows nicely :)

On Thursday March 31st, 2005, Alec Pure (332) writes:

wow this is cool ~~GAP~~

On Thursday March 31st, 2005, Saint_Reaper (284) writes:

ooooh i like it, short yet powerful....emotions make the best writeing tool...i like

On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, island warrior (300) writes:

Very well put. Nice write.

On Wednesday March 30th, 2005, suicideseason (2128) writes:

Nice piece...strong sentiment...the ending is a killer.

On Tuesday March 29th, 2005, Elise (263) writes:

Heartbreaking, yet beautiful. Written wonderfully..you captured a hard to capture feeling. Welcome to DP I hope you stay a while ^_^

On Tuesday March 29th, 2005, Gideon Lost (187) writes:

Eloquently put. Simple. Good write.

On Tuesday March 29th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:

beautiful, i like this..keep it up..and Welcome to DP

On Tuesday March 29th, 2005, happilydepressed (213) writes:

painfully beautiful

On Tuesday March 29th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:

OMG!! I love this!! Absolutely soopa-doopa amazing work!!!!!!!!!! It's beautiful. ~WithoutWords~

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