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"Selfless Suicide or Freedom in Death" by tormentedsoul666

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Maybe they're right,
Maybe they're wrong.
I can't tell now,
I waited too long.
They tell me my life,
It's all in vain.
But its not my fault,
YOU caused me this pain.
I can't live,
But I can't seem to die.
Keeping it all in,
Lie after lie.
I'm fine, trust me,
They don't know it's not true.
I'm only this way,
Cause I don't know what to do.
I try it again,
But my body won't give.
Why oh why,
Is it so hard to live?
People always tell me,
I know how you feel.
But they don't even know me,
Let alone what is real.
I hate this feeling,
Deep within my chest.
No matter what I do,
It won't seem to rest.
Arm warmers and fishnet,
Cover these scars.
Thugh no one else can see them,
I know exactly where they are.
A slice on my stomach,
A few on my arm.
I know they don't mean it,
But they all cause me harm.
Thats why I must end it,
Get rid of my life.
So I wrote this note,
With the blood from my knife....

Goodbye now I'm leaving,
Don't cry because of me.
Be happy that I'm gone,
Cause now you are free.



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On Friday July 11th, 2008, An Expired Member (7) writes:
Suicide it's a suicide! Me likey too! :P


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, Dark_Goddess (20) writes:
Nicely done, I like it!


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (79) writes:
thank you so much!


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, Solace (1421) writes:
Seems a bit of a cliche now, despite this you seem to have at least provided your own impetus...You have the signs of a good writer, progress well...


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (79) writes:
i wrote it on pure impulse, sitting in my room really sad again for no reason at all, but thanks everyone keeps telling me that, i'm glad someone actually believes in me


On Wednesday April 20th, 2005, tormentedsoul666 (79) writes:
thank you so much!! i love to put pain in my poetry


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
painfully written, but well done nonetheless. i especially like this line "So I wrote this note, With the blood from my knife...."


On Tuesday April 19th, 2005, so_skeevy (76) writes:
sad poem but it flows nicely.



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