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why must you listen to the lies told by your mirror?

do you really feel that way about your self?

under the smile you show so openly.

is it so hard to see what i see?

do i have some super power i don't know about?

what else could it be?

why else do you refuse to see your self as i do?

i can't be the only one who see's it i'm i?

if you could only see your self the way i see you.

there would be no more talk of the beauty you don't see and more of the beauty you do see so clearly.

if you could only see your self the way i see you.

if you would only try you would find it is not hard to see?

does the mirror really effect you that much?
the mirror of lies.

if so you need only ask and i would split it into a million shards just so you could have a true glimpse of your true beauty.



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On Monday June 13th, 2005, lollipoplips (109) writes:
this poem made me hold my breath until i got finished! awesome right, it's always the most beautiful who think themeselves ugly, for in the mirror, they only see their past. great write, man! *Vix


On Sunday June 12th, 2005, Serenity (592) writes:
I cannot begin to express how this made me feel. Or how touching and beautiful it is.


On Monday June 13th, 2005, etarnally damnd (99) writes:
thanks im glad u liked it.


On Sunday June 12th, 2005, An Expired Member (5) writes:
dude I know this might be about my sis mike but its good and I can see where you`re coming from. The girl I write about thinks low of herself but she is beautiful and she dosn`t see it ether.


On Sunday June 12th, 2005, etarnally damnd (99) writes:
yeah man it is about ur sis. and its freakn crazy isn't it. i mean its so obvious but they wont except it.-michael


On Sunday June 12th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:
...gosh...


On Sunday May 15th, 2005, Ice Dragoness (18) writes:
beautiful, I've felt like this before, I've also been on the other side, busy believing the mirror's lies


On Wednesday April 13th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
i agree with TheUnluckyOne, our own imperfections are seen more clearly to us then others...well done on this piece


On Tuesday April 5th, 2005, LovelyAssassinx (208) writes:
Thanks alot Mikie. I think that everyone sees their own imperfections more the others do. I guess thats why I see myself one way, and you see me another. Thanks for this though. L.y.l.a.b ~Sara


On Monday April 4th, 2005, Raven (373) writes:
Very touching.. I think everyone can relate to this on some level...



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