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What I need by darkdesires
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What I need

~ darkdesires ~

Your eyes glimer like beautiful jewels
And silky smooth hair to match
But that smile...
No that smile has to go

A face worthy of a great sculpting
An intoxicating personality
But when I come off my high
It leaves me in pieces

Crimson red lips
Sweeter than pure honey
And that tongue
A venomous stinger

Tell me you love me
Hold me tight forever
I need it...
I need the lie

Give me hope
A tomorrow to look onto
Sweet candy on my lips
But its only temporary

So love me
Hold me
Please... just a little longer
I need the lie... more than ever
I need that fix...

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  • Killswitch On Tuesday, November 24, 2009, Killswitch (468) wrote:

    This one is my favorite so far that I have read. Easy to feel your pain with the way you have let this out, and shared yourself. Beautiful. =)

  • Hello Dead Kitty On Wednesday, November 8, 2006, Hello Dead Kitty (48) wrote:

    A quite beautiful and moving write...excellent job, my friend!

  • The Zebra Warrior On Wednesday, July 26, 2006, The Zebra Warrior (2209) wrote:

    we all need a fix and I like the contrasting sweet tastes of the poem with the more bitter reality, if not an instant fav, certainly more cut throat and foward..not half bad. Col.

  • Kinkypoptart On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, Kinkypoptart (663) wrote:

    Beautiful, baby... Much like you. :) ~*~tart~*~

  • Dissolving Poet On Tuesday, July 25, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:

    Wow this almost brought me to tears dark; I couldn't let go of it but I wanted to it just hurt. I understand this completely and it was just sad and lovely ~nightly


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