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Its time to wake up hun by darkdesires
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Its time to wake up hun

~ darkdesires ~

Tell me a tale of your sorrow you say
Sing me a song so beautiful and sweet you beg
Fill you with all that is me

You want to know all that is me
You want to taste and feel all that my words
You want to tell me that you love me now too

But its time to wake up
Time to realize what you love is my words
Transended thoughts, dreams, all illusions

Forgive this soul for all trespassings
Giving you the images you love so dear
But its time to wake up my dear

Maybe one day someone will love the flesh
Love the disgusting flesh that is reality
Are you starting to wake

However lets peel the flesh back
Remove all the truth and reality
That is where you'll find this love

Its behind all the words you see on the screen
Its behind all of your sweet dreams
Its there and only there my dear

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  • Aurora_Light On Thursday, March 9, 2006, Aurora_Light (532) wrote:

    i fear to ask where the insperation for this work comes from... and i can say nothing more then what The Crimson Queen has said you captured what i fear when it comes to love. and you captured is beautilfully. *bows* well done

  • cucuio On Wednesday, March 8, 2006, cucuio (170) wrote:

    painful but amazing, related to to...~hugs~

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, March 8, 2006, The Crimson Queen (1064) wrote:

    Now this, is fucking excellent hun! Many times I've felt like someone was in love with only what they wanted to see and not what a person truely is underneath.

  • Dissolving Poet On Wednesday, March 8, 2006, Dissolving Poet (784) wrote:

    Wow...that tore at me with love and..I don't know

  • The Crimson King On Wednesday, March 8, 2006, The Crimson King (30) wrote:

    Excellent metaphor with peeling back the flesh and understanding what it is we are underneath.

  • Ice Dragoness On Wednesday, March 8, 2006, Ice Dragoness (13) wrote:

    your flesh is not disghusting... how many goddamn times do I have to say so? and I did love you. more then anything or anyone, you cheated and I ran.. i miss you but I can only take so much


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