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I Want More

The only time I feel alive is
When I can feel you
You so deep inside my flesh
You so deep inside my soul
You forcing me to feel
You forcing me to give everything
I have in me and even some things I don't
You making me scream and beg for more
You making me beg and scream for nomore
"please baby nomore"
Please....?
Please...?
Please..?
Please just make the pain on the outside
A little more then the pain on the inside
"hurt me"
Enough to dull the real pain you have etched
"inside"
Make me feel
Force me to scream
Tell me beg for "more"
The only time I feel alive is
When I can feel you
You so deep inside....of me

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On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, Diva_Satanica (110) writes:

Dont change it, it is great the way it is dark, erotic and sensual.-D.S

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Damn, erotic, dark and all the other stuff. great work here.-Kefka

On Friday July 18th, 2003, An Expired Member (51) writes:

...So turned on by this..>yes I'm twisted by damn

On Sunday May 25th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

hell ya! .. i love this write .. so much pain must have been emptyed out when you wrote this .. so much still left. beautiful write. D&A

On Wednesday May 7th, 2003, An Expired Member (4) writes:

Wow, I can relate to many parts...It makes you think how much we give of ourselves for others

On Saturday April 19th, 2003, Bast (896) writes:

I love it as well... hehehe... it's sensual, but yes... sometimes allowing someone to take our heart and body and do as they like is a form of self mutilation...

On Thursday April 17th, 2003, Vampira (98) writes:

Thanx! I will leave this alone for now, since noone thinks it's a mess maybe just a little tweak later....but it's yours for now!

On Wednesday April 16th, 2003, MindRape (886) writes:

mess? mess? what mess? this was BRILLIANT! loved this one lady wish you would post more often

On Wednesday April 16th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (698) writes:

I like this very much - I don't think it's a mess either. Just glad to see you posting some new ones!!! Freak! : )

On Wednesday April 16th, 2003, Bloodofdeadpoets (70) writes:

i agree with the comment above its great, thanks for sharing

On Wednesday April 16th, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl (343) writes:

I really like this. I'm inferring that this is about self-mutilation. I like the way you made it sound like sex. Very well-written. I don't think this is a mess at all. Keep writing!

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