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Let The Rain Fall

The night sky
Is pouring down over
My cold and dead skin
Trying to dig it's way into
My paralyzed heart

There is nothing.

Dripping and drumming
Down on top of my head
Drip after drip beat after beat
My numb brain does not answer

There is nothing.

I lift my head
To the pouring sky
Eyes open wide
In time to catch
One last bomb of light
I listen to hear
One last scream
From the dying night

Now that was something.

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On Tuesday September 19th, 2006, Bluegirl (247) writes:

I love this. It has a very morbid feel to it.

On Tuesday December 9th, 2003, Audrey_Star (29) writes:

this is clever...especially the turn at the end, I like it.

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, Diva_Satanica (110) writes:

rain is wonderful, even more to so when expressed how you did.-D.S

On Wednesday August 13th, 2003, Deliverence (799) writes:

Awesome!! Screams in the night eh? No wonder i like you stuff..has all the elements i just love..-Kefka

On Thursday July 10th, 2003, Twilight (2101) writes:

that WAS something. nice work. im swimming in your rain of talent...keep it up

On Thursday June 26th, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:

I know exactly how you feel and you expressed it very well in this poem. I loved it!

On Sunday June 15th, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

hmmm.. this is beautifuly built' very well done:[D&A]

On Thursday June 12th, 2003, An Expired Member (7) writes:

just replying on your comment on "Reality" - I'm not staying, sorry, but anyone from DP can email me if you want - I'd like to stay in touch with as many of you as possible... [roamingdk@hotmail.com]

On Thursday June 12th, 2003, Little_Egypt (4) writes:

I love it, describes the way i feel about the rain. Hmm and you're from around my area :p

On Tuesday June 10th, 2003, Raven (377) writes:

This piece seemed to encompass all the rain in its splendour . . . something a rare few can achieve while only using words . . . absolutely wonderful. _Raven

On Tuesday June 10th, 2003, An Expired Member (5) writes:

good work i am joyed i could read it keep up the good work

On Saturday June 7th, 2003, Marek (140) writes:

Interesting, nothing in the night rain affects you, but the final flash of thunder and lightning, when you open your eyes, does. Such grand implications. Good work two thumbs up.

On Thursday June 5th, 2003, SilentAssassin (39) writes:

I can always feel the rain when it hits me. Every drop of it. Very good poem. I enjoyed it!

On Sunday May 25th, 2003, braindeadpoet (127) writes:

That was something. I felt like I was there w/ you...well done!

On Saturday May 24th, 2003, TropicalSnowstorm (748) writes:

Interesting piece! The ending suits it perfectly and shows the dark humour I love from you! "I listen to hear One last scream From the dying night Now that was something" - very nice! Ciao, T/S

On Thursday May 22nd, 2003, DoctorAsh (506) writes:

and the shoes smack through the puddles ... so definetly elite

On Tuesday May 20th, 2003, manywalks (950) writes:

I've always loved the rain, what a wonderful littl ewrite this was, thanks! ~ mw

On Tuesday May 20th, 2003, cre (508) writes:

wow.. i swear i can feel the rain hitting me... wonderful write.

On Tuesday May 20th, 2003, CrestFallenSky (35) writes:

the storm is both graceful and turbulent at once, good work, ...keep writing ~CFS

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