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I am a wordsmith
not really
a remarkable man
but bendable
at the same time

I've been a
lit smoke in
an ashtray
in front of a
two-cent
hooker and I've
seen gandhi
fall from
the sky

he wore
indian slacks
with a
parachute belt
and spoke
of influence
like it
was on fire

it was then
of course
I lost my
periwinkle dust
for another
venture of cosmic
radiation
that I didn't have
to incline

yeah

I have a mighty
horse cock
with goliath
balls and
if you're
not careful
it'll spit
in your eye

go right ahead and
suck my dick and see
it ejaculate on your
face

these walls are mine
slut and I'm paying you
so you shouldn't really
say anything

your mouth
should be full
and tight
around my hardness

this blowhole
prick can't
wait to
candy coat your
mouth with
shooting
butterscotch

( though it
probably won't
taste much
like candy
I'm sure

or look like it
for the matter )

you should
know of my lust
seeing those
red high heels
trying to
trick me into
ramming you home
before I
get to suckle
those tits

I imagine
ripping your
hair out
in clumps

but that's just
thoughts
really

I'm not abusive
though if you
give me more cash
I could be

you watch
me fondle
your tight
ample ass
as I thrust
with severe
power into
your slick
pink toy

pushing through
longevity
with no doubt
I'll give
each of us
what we want

two hundred
dollar bills
hit the sheets
and I'm
not ready
for a cigar

but a nice
hot bath to
wash your
sticky love
juice off
of me

before you leave
let me just say

I've had better




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On Monday November 20th, 2006, elisa (1990) writes:
... still love this.


On Saturday December 17th, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:
heh, I've read this quite a few times but have never left a comment mostly because I'm always just sitting here after going fuck.... amazingly vivid write, vulgar, crass and real. rocks my fucking socks. thank you.


On Friday June 24th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (404) writes:
harsh, yet real. good write. even though it makes me cringe, i cannot deny its artistic value.


On Monday March 21st, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
when i hear the word 'wordsmith' i think of a blacksmith making things. over the course of this poem the blacksmith i picture swallows his hammer, blows it out his ass, and pounds away at molten iron with his fists


On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
It's funny how you did my harder piece first. I am not sure why the simple direction in some of my poetry , Always gets the most interesting comments. I think the effiel tower is bigger than my cock though.


On Tuesday March 22nd, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
Blowing iron out my ass...I could have done that as well , But the prostitute really wasn't willing. Sadly. LOL. Thanks for your comment King. Most are afraid to get dirty.


On Monday March 21st, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
shortly after his hands finally burn off and he has no more ability to even alter the iron, he takes a dump on it then smiles like he made the fuckign eiffel tower.


On Monday March 21st, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (418) writes:
other than that the imagery was intense. but so is an aneurysm


On Friday March 18th, 2005, Sin (1623) writes:
damn this was brutal in a very warped sense of sexualtiy kinda way...and that last line was just vicious...just damn


On Friday March 18th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
shiattt...this is fucking twisted ....vulgar and lustful....did i say fucking twisted ? !....


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (848) writes:
Jesus, as Twi said, this is very effective, your last lines were awesome, wonderful..


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Twilight (2097) writes:
damn..i have to admit-this was very effective. im feeling used myself. very intense in all its wording. and quite a merciless ending.


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, hate_doll (327) writes:
intense. your casual brutality is aces. that's what I look for in a good write, brutality, honestym and above all, rawness. The rest will work itself out. This definitely worked out. I don't think it's mean, realistic, if anything.


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, hate_doll (327) writes:
but all in all, amazing, I'm impressed greatly.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
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On Friday March 11th, 2005, elisa (1990) writes:
you have a good sense of humor:) i agree sex is exaggerated...evolution seems to be degenerating...like wild kingdom all over again:) elisa


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, elisa (1990) writes:
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On Thursday March 10th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
..interesting write..definately..but yea, mean...Welcome to DP


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
Thanks " Crimson Queen " for the welcome. I have not had the pleasure to read any of your works yet...I will do that right now. Thanks so much for reading one of my raw writes.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
well i hope you enjoy...if not, oh well :P


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Brenya Rose (187) writes:
This was so mean. I liked it for the wording and it was delictably vulger, but it ended so...mean.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Jedi_MindFuck (315) writes:
the choppiness of it is nerve racking...my head is in pain from trying to read it. i'm not saying to be negative...i kind of liked that fact..unique.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
Bleh, I can't tell if this is horrible because of the content or if it's just horrible because.. well, fuck.. because it's just horrible.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
Horrible is good to. This was certainly not meant to be pretty and it is meant to be read outloud. There is no other way to consider this piece. =)


On Friday March 18th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
Mayhaps I worded it wrong. When I meant horrible - I meant not that it was shitty poetry. I meant that the content was degrading and demeaning.. I can't figure out how to express in words what I mean. My apologies.


On Monday March 21st, 2005, Liz (401) writes:
That was my reaction as well. I want to punch the poet for thinking these things and I want to punch him again for talking incessantly about himself afterwards. And then I might concede that it was skillfully written.


On Monday March 21st, 2005, Liz (401) writes:
But, seriously, stop gloating. Humility is one of the most impressive human characteristics. Thank us for reading and shut the hell up; it's not your place to educate, only to present.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Alec Pure (332) writes:
but your wordage was good


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Alec Pure (332) writes:
wow the first part had nothing to do with the second part or though it seems um i think you tried to hard to make this sexual and mean


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
I often write in a very powerful manner. Don't really consider boundries in what I do. If you'd like to know more about my work , Or the publishing I'm involved with , Please check out my other site..It's listed on my darkpoetry page. =)



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