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staring at your tresses
I wonder if you
are fantastically drawn
pretty again

or just a
girlish twitter
held by mocking
brown spiky
limbs
and social
proclivities
never usual
to dissipate
in hot mexican
sun.

sometimes
late at night
I correct my
floppy
relationship
back into its
heated
encumber

watching our
tune play
remorseful spicy
beats of courage -

through ebony
colored drapes
a lilac breezy dress
is tied tight
at the tiny expanse
of a concave
backbone

you shiver against
my palm as I tuck
a gold hoop
cuddling the swell
of your earlobe

I imagine the back
of your almost
feline shape
on its legs
roaring with
luminous prose
about your
beauty

the flash fades like
whisky olives from
your grandfathers
old cedar bin -

tonight we
will stand upon
a golden rustic
mexico with
old weeds in
our fingers and
good-bye clouds
aging on us

knowing the
performance
will consist
of mink
collected with
silver tuxes

where circles
of people grip
music and
sing for the
antique of
marriage -

I close the
door waiting
for you to finish
another sparkle
of eyeliner

as you beam.



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On Saturday June 4th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
*me there... absolutely lovely, my dear.


On Saturday June 18th, 2005, jaunty pill (74) writes:
I don't know how I missed your comment. :( You are so kind and I can tell that you are also a thoughtful reader. I also find it hard sometimes to tie into a poem , Glad to see that this one could do that for you. Rare moment indeed. Hugs.


On Saturday June 4th, 2005, doll on the rag (222) writes:
there are few poems i enjoy that relate personal memories of places or tie in elements of a sensory-specific area, because they're sometimes hard to fully embrace if you've never been to the place described therein... this is one of those few that takes m


On Saturday April 2nd, 2005, Lotophagi (449) writes:
wow, subtly sensual.... amazing descriptions, beautiful flow. superb write. Thank you.


On Wednesday March 23rd, 2005, A Velvet Tongue (527) writes:
*tonight we will stand upon a golden rustic mexico with old weeds in our fingers and good-bye clouds aging on us *....this is stellar..the whole piece..and the passage is just invoking..more please!


On Wednesday March 23rd, 2005, boughtwithblood (294) writes:
initially it seemed fatalistic, but had a funny hopeful bent to it by the end. "whiskey olives.. old cedar bin" really stands out in terms or the sights and smells that it evokes.


On Monday March 21st, 2005, Sin (1623) writes:
there are so many pretty lines my mind is stuck in this euphoric state of bliss...i really like your style, you are indeed a must read ~kristy


On Saturday March 19th, 2005, Anth (1609) writes:
i love this, the descriptions are original, unique, a kind of flavour to your poetry, and ive nevr used that word before to describe a poem, refreshing to read something like this


On Friday March 18th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
This read so effortlessly.. like you were just having a conversation. usually I find myself noticing forced lines and words.. You don't write that way.. It's refreshing..


On Friday March 18th, 2005, ElegantKiss (399) writes:
Wonderful imagery.. Excellent floetry. "and good-bye clouds aging on us" I had to pause on that line. Lovely, lovely!


On Friday March 18th, 2005, AniDayz (1241) writes:
damn...the imagery is astounding,just the way you pieced this all together...is amazing. theres a true uniquness about your style that i especially love...


On Friday March 11th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1231) writes:
magnificently done! i am in awe


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, purr_verse (1427) writes:
beautiful piece; the imagery is wonderfully woven - intricate and unusual yet vividly clear. Gorgeous conclusion in particular, and all-around excellent write.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Brenya Rose (187) writes:
Now this, this was lovely.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Alec Pure (332) writes:
i liked this one and i liked it alot more then the others i commented on nicely done



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