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"Girl With Dirty Fingernails" by Carmina Gitana

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I often see her,
the girl
with prickly eyes
and smudged black eyeliner around them.

She takes the same train as me.
She opens a book
and stares at it.
She moves her head
so that her hair falls
to cover her face.

She has not yet learned to dress.
Her metallic nail polish is chipped
and there is dirt
under her fingernails.

Sometimes, I look at her, and
when she knows I'm looking,
her mouth hardens
like a streak of pink clay.

I want to tell her
it will be OK. I want
to lie to her,
but I know, if I speak, she will only
noisily turn a page,
and burrow deeper
into her own space.

I'd like to touch her,
to tell her,
it will be OK,
and beauty isn't everything,
and love is only chemical anyway,

but she would not believe me.
She is smarter than I think,
and she knows better
than to speak to strangers
and time-travelers.



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On Thursday July 12th, 2007, saintedmad (1188) writes:
time i favourite.d you; your writes have such grace, such simple beauty and elegance, and your eyes pinpoint little details so deftly, so many of us miss. .."love is only chemical anyway" as if we had any control over it all; marvelous write


On Monday March 19th, 2007, carlosjackal (1703) writes:
Really like it :) And those last 2 lines were perfect.


On Monday March 19th, 2007, Nuri (192) writes:
Yes, I echo the Magic Hatter. The best kind of poetry for me are those which convey deep meanings with simple words. Kudos! Thank you for sharing this! (I will look very carefully for scrutinising eyes next time I'm on the train)


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, stormtalk (908) writes:
youre the kind of writer i read to enjoy, not to constructively criticize. there arent too many of those here. so thanks


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, Freebird (642) writes:
"and she knows better than to speak to strangers and time-travelers" I love the ending. I see people like this too, and sometimes, I feel like the girl you describe. Thanks for sharing


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (2403) writes:
this is a fantastic read, I like your approach, deep without intellengstia nonsense...somehow profund and relative and accordingly so....wish I could be as direct and resonant as this...still trapped on Cloud Cuckoo Surreal land...oh well


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, BeautifullyRuined (145) writes:
"love is only chemical anyway" this line is so heartbreaking in its truthfulness.I loved this whole piece.~Elana


On Saturday March 17th, 2007, Sharon Rose (663) writes:
missed your finely crafted perfection, really...



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