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"Lonely Night (Key of Blue)" by Carmina Gitana

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It's a lonely night here
in this place
crammed full of
lonely people
drowning themselves
in their glasses,
drowning
the room in thick
blue smoke
that stings my eyes so
& makes them water.

But I like it that way.

It's a lonely night here
at this bar
where no one comes to toast a victory
or a beginning,
where no one drinks
for the pleasure of drinking
anymore,
and the lights are
too dim to see
the eyes
of the bartender, as he wipes
clear liquid
from the bar by your glass,

and we like it that way.

Yeah, it's a lonely, lonely night,
'cause I know just where you are
tonight,
& the color of her lipstick
& the smell of her hair
& I know just what you're whispering to her
tonight,
& I know just how you're touching her
tonight,

so I'm drowning my knowledge
in this slicked, wet glass,
in this thick
blue smoke
that makes my eyes water so
on this lonely night.



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On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, Zen (629) writes:
. heh i like you, youre goin on my favorites


On Friday October 20th, 2006, hate_doll (328) writes:
you did indeed catch the feeling of the lonely blues perfectly, the slow melancholy dripping from a faucet, hits you every few seconds with a splash. this bar reminds me of 20s b&w speakeasies with gangsters and harlequin flappers with torn dresses


On Tuesday June 13th, 2006, Bakkhus Unbound (1108) writes:
"& the color of her lipstick & the smell of her hair" I feel the loneliness of this blue bar... i feel the music played drunkenly off the corner stage, in this place where only desperation goes to drink. Nice.


On Saturday February 18th, 2006, MindRape (886) writes:
I could smell the teh aftershave of the bartender..... Powerful and defiant write. loved it :)


On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, Michelle Xiao (507) writes:
Very realistic descriptions, as though it's playing right in front of us, the smoke pervading the air, you can trace the images so fluently because it's so well observed. Excellent.


On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, Lab Rat (326) writes:
this is fantastic... I can taste this.


On Monday February 13th, 2006, elisa (2018) writes:
those ghostly images can haunt every corner of reality.....sometimes numb can even be difficult to reach.



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