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She twists
inside a storm
of her own making.
Her laughter flashes,
her flashing earrings sing,
her singing bracelets beckon
to the unseen spectator,
and her eyes glitter
in the dark.

Her dance
is desperate,
frantic
as she stays
a step ahead
of morning,
of another banishment,
another leavetaking.

The fire flashes
on her hair, her skin,
turning her golden
as her bracelets,
backlights the fluid outline
of her body
against her swirling skirt.
She dances.

She leaps,
the fire leaps,
her thoughts leap faster -
and she knows, someday,
the fire will
be gray ash,
and she will wake,
naked,
weeping,
and alone.



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On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, MercyRain (135) writes:
a very excellent poem... the feeling of exile and whatnot comes across nicely... i can't escape the opening line though where it's a storm of her own making...


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Carmina Gitana (110) writes:
This was the most perfect and most accurate interpretion I have ever read, of any of my poems. Thank you for reading and thinking about it and writing this. It made my day.


On Wednesday April 27th, 2005, Carmina Gitana (110) writes:
The visual shape, while an interesting thought, was unintentional - DP's default format is centered :)


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, MercyRain (135) writes:
it seems like this could refer to the whirling dervish dance, or even that the exile itself is self-imposed, that she's fighting to preserve something that even she knows


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, MercyRain (135) writes:
is already dead and gone, just stubbornly refusing to let go of something that just simply doesn't exist anymore


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, MercyRain (135) writes:
frantic to stay ahead, but since this is self-imposed, she really keeps moving and keeps moving so she doesn't have the time to register that it's all a sham, all dead already


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, MercyRain (135) writes:
using this interpretation, the end stanza wraps up the self-enforced delusion nicely, and the gypsy imagery instead of just a gypsy, becomes metaphorical of some lost love, or even more fitting, lost youth...


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, MercyRain (135) writes:
the clinging onto te more gypsy-like wild and feral years...


On Tuesday April 26th, 2005, MercyRain (135) writes:
it also intrigues me, the visual shape of the poem, a phallus... several directions one can take with this


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, your_only_love (165) writes:
heartbreaking, soul-reaping... the desperate run because before we know it there will be nowhere left to run. Amazing write.


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Forgotten Angel (474) writes:
i've nothing else to add..cause every1 below me has said it all...great write -Kel


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Solace (1425) writes:
A lifestyle that is no longer what it was though some keep to the traditions...or try to at least...a wonderful piece, like a moment of grandeur, a memoire of what once was, then the realisation, alone...


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Carmina Gitana (110) writes:
You've got it exactly. It's about exile and memories - it's sort of a companion piece to Rhythms of the Sun, in fact. Thank you :)


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Alec Pure (334) writes:
i agree with blue i wasnt exspecting that ending but it fit beautifully ~~GAP~~


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:
"and she will wake, naked, weeping, and alone." those last lines broke my fragile heart..breathtaking write


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, blue (1740) writes:
oooh, I somehow though that this would end on a high note, :) nice! ...you drew me in and turned me around, great writing again from you. *applause* ~b


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, sIo (884) writes:
so livining and colorful with a wreck at the end...nice work.



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