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"Black Spaghetti" by Carmina Gitana

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Determined to create something
sophisticated and exotic
and adult,

we filled the kitchen
with dirty pots
and dirty jokes,

with the sharp, strong scent of spices,
and the sharp, strong sense of intimacy

of the sort that can only live
in the kitchen.

We chopped onions
and managed not to cry,
and shared tomato sauce-smeared kisses,
and licked olive oil
(extra virgin)
off one another's fingers.

Later, tasting
the fruits of our rambunctious labors,
we could not stop smiling,

the night sliding away
between our lips
like black spaghetti.



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On Sunday April 8th, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl (345) writes:
Mmm... very sensory. I could taste it and smell it and feel it and see it... and even hear it. Very seductive and sweet.


On Tuesday March 14th, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm (692) writes:
Fantastic imagery! Ciao, T/S


On Thursday September 29th, 2005, An Expired Member (26) writes:
Sweet writing, very erotic and tactile


On Sunday June 19th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (321) writes:
erotic, enchanting and just the right lenght. -kitty


On Friday March 18th, 2005, steuss (145) writes:
You do have an incredibly talent at conjuring images in your reader's minds. This was touching with its sincerity and honesty, glee and joy. So very well done! I love your alliteration.


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, -Oz- (173) writes:
'delicious' -Oz


On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, purr_verse (1437) writes:
completely excellent, evocative, beautifully crafted write. I agree with Brenya's comment. Fantastic piece.


On Tuesday March 1st, 2005, anth (1612) writes:
its great toi come to your works for something fresh and original, i utterly loved the ending


On Tuesday March 1st, 2005, SamoneDrone (408) writes:
for me food and love often go hand-in-hand. nice write! ....-samone


On Monday February 28th, 2005, blue (1751) writes:
Oh! Carmina, this was just....simply fantastic! Superb write!!! ..yes indeed...~b


On Monday February 28th, 2005, Jay Jii (336) writes:
I love the way you play with my senses. Another wonderful work. I like your style a lot. Consider yourself faved.


On Monday February 28th, 2005, AniDayz (1284) writes:
sexy...'and licked olive oil (extra virgin) off one another's fingers...'hmmmm....i can taste this sensuality...


On Monday February 28th, 2005, An Expired Member (24) writes:
hahaha, it's sweet, and cute, and yet... deep and dark, Really like it :)


On Monday February 28th, 2005, A Broken Soul (103) writes:
almost disturbing... almost seductive, but deffinetly awesome! i love the title, it's very catchy. ^Autumn^


On Monday February 28th, 2005, MightofNight (11) writes:
Awesome. Love the imagery and tone. Brings old memories back into vivid focus. :-D


On Monday February 28th, 2005, Brenya Rose (190) writes:
Mmmmm, this tickles me inside and tantalizes the part of my brain that translates poetry into feelings.


On Monday February 28th, 2005, stormtalk (909) writes:
Flawlessly lovely.


On Monday February 28th, 2005, Astra Dei (645) writes:
Awww. this is very sweet. i know this feeling. of cooking up a meal with romance on the side. lovely


On Monday February 28th, 2005, Elise (267) writes:
Interesting title, it made me wanna read. I'm glad I did..the romance of cooking together, eating together, and such..nice work ^_^


On Monday February 28th, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1248) writes:
damn, i like this...and the title just kicks!



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