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Last night, I dreamt
that I'd gone back
to where I'd come from,

Where the pulsing of the earth
was clear and strong beneath my feet,
and found its answer
in the pulsing of my blood,

Where life was motion, measured
in the beats of my heart
against the wind.

Last night, I dreamt
that you came back for me,
and that together,
we rode bareback on the evening,

and with arms grown long as the road,
we plucked stars out of the sky
and fed them to one another.

Last night, I danced
on a forgotten beach,
my body twisting like a tongue of fire in the dark,
until I found the rhythms of the sun
and fell across the broken strings of your guitar.

When I awoke, there was sand in my hair
and salt on my lips,
and my hands were reaching
for home.



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On Saturday June 2nd, 2007, An Expired Member (7) writes:
I like this. "With arms grown long as the road" is my favorite part.


On Sunday December 3rd, 2006, Zen (629) writes:
well!you roped me in! lol


On Monday May 2nd, 2005, An Expired Member (4) writes:
Completely awestruck by the glorious sensuality exuded in your writing. So thankful that i was graced with this tonight.


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, sIo (892) writes:
oh wow this was so gorgeous and intriguing yet at the end you cut the rope you'd woven for us to climb up. truly beautiful write. i can't get over the ending. it's superb.


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (553) writes:
I find this peice to be very real to me as it brings me back to a time that I have since grown very fond of


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Solace (1424) writes:
Reminds me of a book I read, the wheel of time, the tuathanan or something like that are nomads searching for the song, yet they cannot find it...they are searching for home and yet they are home...as far as i interpret anyway


On Saturday March 12th, 2005, Solace (1424) writes:
this piece is a perfect prelude to the other half of it, and brings it in even more clarity, so much can be lost that you no longer know from where you had come and where home was...adrift and astray, dreaming for what is an evanescence...


On Monday February 28th, 2005, Jay Jii (336) writes:
Lovely. This piece oozes with regretful longing.


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Chimauron (126) writes:
I have no idea how to critigue such an outstanding work. Except to say, make more make more!!! You have made my favorites list with this one.


On Saturday February 19th, 2005, Gideon Lost (189) writes:
Beautiful! I love your style. So vibrant and alive.


On Friday February 18th, 2005, anth (1611) writes:
another truly stunning work, grabbed me at - Where life was motion, measured in the beats of my heart against the wind. and swept me away with and with arms grown long as the road, we plucked stars out of the sky and fed them to one another. - perfect


On Friday February 18th, 2005, your_only_love (164) writes:
gods, that was an amazing piece... jaw dropping, amazingly beautiful, wonderful, and so full of life and love...



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