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He was a boy from Queens.
Smoked red Marlboros, talked
out of the side of his mouth,
and kissed like a demon.

His mother would call him,
and I'd hear
her wet staccato voice.
He would say, patiently,
"Ma, Ma, I'm fine, I'm all right. Be home soon."

He handled me clumsily but well. He would say
"God, you are fuckin' pretty,"
while I melted all over
his leather coat.

Right now, he's probably telling
some other eighteen-year-old
she's so fuckin' pretty,
and when his wife calls, says,
"I'm fine, I'm all right. Be home soon."



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On Tuesday May 20th, 2008, fallen (276) writes:
Colorful and nostalgic, very entertaining.


On Saturday March 1st, 2008, carlosjackal (1721) writes:
Bloody clever and thoroughly enjoyable piece. Write on, Lady :) -Carl


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, Alanarchy (1697) writes:
:D Liked how this is a fond memory, even though the actions of the boy from queens aren't very kosher. Kind of like slapping the devil in the mouth before you kiss him/her. Very cool.


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, the-rapist (389) writes:
feeling my roots in this one. bellissimo!


On Saturday February 23rd, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:
"I melted all over his leather coat" - great imagery! Ciao, T/S


On Friday February 22nd, 2008, The Zebra Warrior (2404) writes:
and exactly how does a demon kiss? A bit on the short side....no, not the demon the piece. Such a stoic, downbeat ending, reminds me of a touch of tough ghetto living; its all lies, gullability and lessons in love. Again not really my 'thing' but interesting....


On Friday February 22nd, 2008, Ainsof (1860) writes:
a mature reflection here, very thoughtful and artistically expressed. makes me wonder, how well did he 'handle' the persona featured here... the moral implication is solidly implied. nicely done!


On Friday February 22nd, 2008, Ainsof (1860) writes:
I smoke red marlboros when I smoke, that is... Oh! and no way! I have a leather jacket! hmmmmm but I'm not from queens. hmf. but! I did have a wife! but, that's not why I'm divorced... hmmmmf.



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