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"How All The Stories end" by Carmina Gitana

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I know you believe it when you say
you love me, and I know
your body doesn't lie.
And I know you mean it when you say
you'll miss me
whenever we say goodbye.

But I know, when you get home,
you hold her tight, and you swear
that she's the only one.
And I know, one day,
you'll have to stay away
'cause I know how all the stories end.

I've learned to keep myself amused
on lonely, sunny Saturdays.
I walk the streets in my high-heeled shoes,
and collect the glances coming my way.

I do my shopping, I read a book,
I go out for drinks with a friend.
I don't stay up too late,
and I've learned not to wait,
'cause I know how all the stories end.

You come over on another Tuesday night,
bringing roses in a paper sack,
and a few hours later, you say,
how you wish you didn't need to get back.

You give me a kiss, and you hold me close,
and you knock back the last of your wine.
You button your shirt, slip on your watch,
and blame all your problems on time.

You met her too early, and you found me too late
and you wish you could start over again.
I just listen to you, I have no advice,
'Cause I know how all the stories end.

And meanwhile, a few miles away across town,
she waits for the sound of your car.
She sets up the alarm clock and the coffee machine,
and doesn't bother wondering where you are.

She doesn't think about dyeing her hair, or read
what Cosmo says about holding your man.
'Cause you might get there late, but you always come home,
And she knows how all these stories end.



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On Wednesday July 9th, 2008, Bast (895) writes:
This is a wonderful bittersweet poem on the nature of being the other woman. I've been on both sides of the equation, and I'll promise that the stories don't end the same way all the time... but they always bring heartbreak. Lovely poem.


On Friday June 27th, 2008, mysterylove (92) writes:
I walk the streets in my high-heeled shoes,and collect the glances coming my way. ah i so know this one =) awesome write


On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, Ainsof (1860) writes:
very mature... I get the rhyme and refrain work well to suggest lyrics, but the intelligent unfurling of the narrative really makes this so much more than lyrical...I like the way the watch is slipped on right before time is blamed... and I like the reversal at the end where the same refrain takes on different meaning for the wife (I take this is clearly implied by finding too soon, and then the persona here too late) These are the stories that end marriages, me thinks, and the patience and maturity of the voice here is very appealing and yet somewhat lamenting... lamenting the story's end. Very impressive, very enjoyable... I like very much *bows before teller of tales wise, artistic and witty*


On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, Carmina Gitana (118) writes:
Actually, I'd meant the last stanza to indicate that this isn't the first time he's doing it, it won't be the last, but she's used to it, she puts up with it (for her own reasons), and she is more confident in her relationship than the mistress figure. I may try and rework this to make that clearer. Thanks!


On Tuesday February 26th, 2008, Ainsof (1860) writes:
maybe like bob dylan lyrics... if you like dylan...


On Wednesday February 27th, 2008, Carmina Gitana (118) writes:
Every once in a blue moon, I get a comment like this, and THIS is why I keep posting stuff here. Thank you so much for taking the time to read and respond in this way.


On Friday February 22nd, 2008, TropicalSnowstorm (747) writes:
"she waits for the sound of your car. She sets up the alarm clock and the coffee machine, and doesn't bother wondering where you are." Nice! Ciao, T/S


On Friday February 22nd, 2008, raskal (213) writes:
refreshing to read something clever, well structured and sophisticated w/out being pretentious or affected at all. the poem tells a classic tale through your eyes -fresh and engaging -i enjoyed.


On Thursday February 21st, 2008, Phoenix (10) writes:
Nice one, I like. Going through the same thing i think, my story will end the same


On Thursday February 21st, 2008, Sketso (607) writes:
Rough off-kilter rhythm at times (perhaps just how I read it) but wow... I love the concept and how you captured a new aspect of an age-old tale. Nicely done.



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