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you

i remember you
far better
than you ever really were
in dreams
too sticky
to discuss in polite company.

i'll never be really over you.

yours are the lips i kiss
when i close my eyes

it's your scent
that makes me turn my head
in crowds
you're never in.

i love you
in the middle of the night
when i'm alone.

i can't stand you
in broad daylight.

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On Saturday October 21st, 2006, BeautifullyRuined (151) writes:

I completely understand I believe everyone has been there and you made something complex sound so simple

On Thursday September 14th, 2006, i tremble (47) writes:

i like your simple style. i can always relate to your poems.

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Thorn (443) writes:

*applauds* Bravo. I do commend you on this write. You have an amazing way with words, and this just adds more proof. The words are not very elegant, and yet they don't have to be. Truly briliant.

On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, Sin (1652) writes:

oh dear god i think i love you for this...well maybe because youre so damn sexy too but...this ...i know this all too well

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Bast (1007) writes:

::blush:: thanks!

On Monday January 29th, 2007, Sin (1652) writes:

yep i still love you for this :)

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, saintedmad (995) writes:

you have taken the subtlety of near madness and created a whole bell ajr from it; these last few poems of your stir me with echoes far to real to be anything but tilting surreneder. .. . excellent

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, TwilightMelodies (1094) writes:

oh my...to dream of one so perfectly, only to awaken to the truths of their imperfect flaws...you have whispered doubt into my heart, and twisted my nightmares into breathless landscapes. Beautiful write. *Evangel*

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, elisa (1985) writes:

you put these words together in such a way........you own them......truly exceptional

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:

..*sigh*..I know this too well..the perfect dream people always screw up the pleasant ones and manifest themselves into the worser ones of reality..definitely felt..so very well written. ~ June

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (2195) writes:

..very nice to see you posting again, also.

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, Lab Rat (330) writes:

*grins a slick little grin* This was salty... and familiar.

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