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"a stolen virginity, heart-broken wrist-slitting poem about moons" by Bast

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this is about moons, and changing
and the tendancy of people
to become luna-ticks
sucking the blood of other people's pain
we all like to lick at other people's pain
especially when from wrists slit for our eyes
drama is what we live on, deny though you may
you know it's true.

this is about moons, and wondering
why in the pale light some things
are ok, and others are not
and who died to elect each of us god
why our changing seasons makes us
somehow able to compare and judge
the seasons of others.

this is about moons, and questioning
how one person's heart being broken
is more valid than another's
and quality of poetry, and why
our opinion on what is "good" and what is "bad"
expressions of that anguish, that despair
is the one true path, the only truth.




my virginity of spirit has been stolen
my heart broken by watching compassion
slit her wrists in my bathtub.

the moon watches the grisly scene.

she waxes and wanes
regardless.



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On Saturday December 8th, 2007, Mab (1095) writes:
I love this.


On Friday July 29th, 2005, InsipidTouch (43) writes:
Beautiful


On Thursday March 10th, 2005, Delphoid-Q (284) writes:
Regardless... Seems that way, don't it?


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, BleedSilver (377) writes:
You are wicked awesome. -nods-


On Wednesday February 23rd, 2005, Rain In The Willows (877) writes:
I'm with Mikey


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, happilydepressed (215) writes:
lol


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (1001) writes:
"and who died to elect each of us god" My point exactly. Clever retort or no it still all comes down to a matter of opinion where no one is right or wrong. But preach on, it's _everyone's_ right to do so. ~Ship!


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Bast (1007) writes:
and _everyone's_ right to feel strongly about things too, eh, ship?


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Urban Shipwreck (1001) writes:
Absolutely :)


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, MindRape (902) writes:
LOL Bast you and I are too much alike ;)


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Bast (1007) writes:
wait a minute! i almost said that on YOURS! hehehe, j/k. muah!


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, stormtalk (915) writes:
slick title


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, DarkDruidess (210) writes:
intelligent retort...


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, ardneK (102) writes:
awesome write my dear...beautiful retort - >|


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Alacer_Cogitatus (196) writes:
Bast, once again, a wonderful retort. A_C


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Gideon Lost (194) writes:
Here, here. Let's slit them all.


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Gideon Lost (194) writes:
Oh, and this was a wonderful write Basty


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, blue (1780) writes:
Right on! I refrained from a comment on 'the other'. I usually don't pander to ignorance. *applause* encore. Much enjoyed poetic rebuttal! You rock! ~b


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, lordshadow (209) writes:
Now I'm ignorant... wow, not only am I being burned, but I'm being insulted too. Yay! You waste your time to insult me, but you couldn't express what DP means to you.


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, Metal Lullaby (65) writes:
HAHAHA. Nice. Where is lordshadow...


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1259) writes:
hahaha...i hope that lordshadow enjoys this one...


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, lordshadow (209) writes:
Wow... I'm the bad guy for once. I liked this piece. You retorted nicely. I'm glad I inspired you to write something. Enjoy being above and beyond the rest of us as you apparently are.


On Tuesday February 22nd, 2005, lordshadow (209) writes:
you still missed the point...


On Wednesday February 23rd, 2005, Bast (1007) writes:
no, no, lordy-pie- you missed the point. ::grin::



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