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it's funny.

i actually have to try
to write poetry
about our situation.

i have to sit
and examine
scraps and snippets
of old relationships
in older notebooks
trying to sculpt
some sort of
passion
so i can write
because when i look
at our situation
there is none.

i thought i'd care more.

maybe it's cause
the sex was getting lame
or cause you
were really into math.
but...
i think i wasn't really
in love with you.
i was in love with the thought
of you, and, well
the reality
wasn't nearly
as exciting.

the best
or perhaps
worst
part is-

you broke up with me
i shrugged and walked away
whistling

and now
you're the one scrambling
to keep me on your radar.



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On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, lordshadow (215) writes:
I relate to this in an odd way... I liked this a lot.


On Sunday October 31st, 2004, Drifter (359) writes:
It's been so long... and i've missed this place so. I love this work, and i can't wait until i can roam through all the older works i've missed. Still a favorite - D


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
hehe i know how this feels....this is awesome your poetry always has a hint of humour ^.- (wants to come visit you ^.-)~ss


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, DarkDruidess (203) writes:
I liked this...great emotional write...


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:
this was absolutely wonderful... and i loved the end.. great write!


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, agentlemenspromise (56) writes:
i do that too. apathy is so much prettyer than her sister empathay but sympathy now shes another story...


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, Valentine (509) writes:
Each line is in motion . . powered by your incredible passion for the desire to prove you have no care. The last stanza was brilliant; You have captured the progress of your feelings in so few words. Wonderful. ~ Rose.


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, suicideseason (2144) writes:
_interesting how events progress...once the hunter,now the hunted.


On Wednesday October 27th, 2004, indefined (713) writes:
very true, things can twist and turn at any given point, as this piece demonstrates. well done kitty.



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