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fuck

we don't
make love
anymore

it feels like
what we really do
is reinforce
our dislike

never about
pleasure
anymore
about you
getting off
and me
wanting
to get away

i don't feel sexy
just used
disposable
undone
and broken

what used to make me
scream
with ecstacy
now just makes me cry
quietly
when i think you aren't looking

luckily
i suppose
for our shattered relationship

you never are.

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On Monday August 8th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (319) writes:

You're amazing. -Kitty

On Wednesday June 29th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

damn good write. heart-breaking and real and brutally honest. thank you for sharing this, i can really associate with it and it makes me think about some things I need to think about.

On Wednesday June 29th, 2005, dp_whipping_girl (406) writes:

ps the tears part, and the not looking at you...thats a powerful closing, just really good work.

On Friday June 3rd, 2005, peril_notion (123) writes:

wow.... no amount of words can describe the emotions flowing through me at this very moment. wonderful write. ~Heather

On Wednesday May 25th, 2005, Sin (1639) writes:

ouch...damn his hurt

On Wednesday March 2nd, 2005, The Crimson Queen (1243) writes:

wow....this breaks my heart, its simply that good!! Keep up the good stuff!

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (319) writes:

heart wrenching made me want to curl up and cry or drown in a bathtub loved this -kitty

On Monday January 24th, 2005, CorruptedLittleGirl (341) writes:

This is incredible. I can relate, but I wish I couldn't. You deserve so much better than this.

On Tuesday December 21st, 2004, An Expired Member (12) writes:

this is so good, says so much with few words....one of my faves.

On Sunday December 12th, 2004, gothness (2) writes:

I think that if I could put my previous relationships downfall into words it would have come out similar to this.

On Tuesday December 7th, 2004, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (85) writes:

OMG, these words just hit home so much!!:( u r really talented, hope to find more of ur works!!---steph

On Saturday October 16th, 2004, FallenFaith (47) writes:

omg that is true.I have felt this so many times, even being a guy. Wow, I like this. _favorite_

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, _untouchable_ (72) writes:

oh. ive felt that but never told anyone. i love how you put it into words

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, cre (508) writes:

=( poetically speaking . . you are a master at that final phrase that always leaves me in a sort of verbal double-take. Wonderfully written . . but kitty . . *worries*.

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, cre (508) writes:

I <3 you and I miss you.

On Wednesday September 22nd, 2004, Nadir (619) writes:

Dont hurt yourself kitty, damnit.

On Friday September 17th, 2004, Invader Lyn (57) writes:

Hah. It never ends happily does it? I can relate to every single fucking (pun intended?) word in this amazing write. Well done Bast.

On Monday September 13th, 2004, AMIEVEEL (38) writes:

heart-wrenching, great work!

On Monday September 13th, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:

Oh man.. this really is familiar. it's shocking to read something that's so close to home.. you've worded this perfectly. I'm sorry for your pain, this killed me. Amazing work.

On Monday September 13th, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:

Oh dear Kitty...But I thought you said this time would be different?...DP mail me if you wish to talk because I do know EXACTLY how you feel xx

On Monday September 13th, 2004, Sharon Rose (659) writes:

frighteningly familiar...I can cure the ills here, can you cure them there? If not, knowing how horrible this feeling is, I tell you to run as fast as you can in the opposite direction from whoever....even if it's yourself you're running from...

On Monday September 13th, 2004, purr_verse (1435) writes:

*hug* heartbreaking. awesomely powerful write.

On Monday September 13th, 2004, Delphoid-Q (255) writes:

*Sighs*. Why, Kitty? I can't stand to see you like this again... You have my e-mail address - I suggest you start using it again. *Kisses*.

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Exodus (211) writes:

very nice...love the last stanza....it flat rocks....very powerful..

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Naked_Faerie (170) writes:

Wow...this is overflowing with intensity. I love it. ~Faerie~

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, darkangelXlll (175) writes:

short and simple but overloaded with emotions that arent the best. great write. ~darlin :)

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (1) writes:

lovely....and unfortunately..quite true for alot of people.

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Revolting Theatre (37) writes:

...nice write.

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:

the second verse i found most impacting here,...obvious to qoute that you deserve more,your poems as painful wisdom to me

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, elisa (2017) writes:

ouch...i have a matching scar to this poem...when the point is lost in the purpose,it's like being a ghost in your own relationship...very well expressed. elisa

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Zhee (640) writes:

this was heart wrenching..

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, Six-Out (1823) writes:

I could feel your words chipping at my heart...Kitty...you deserve much better than you subject yourself to. Hopefully you'll realize that...

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, lordshadow (212) writes:

wow

On Monday September 13th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:

ditto

On Sunday September 12th, 2004, mysticventures (545) writes:

time to go!!!

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