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they break each other's hearts
as if
they were bottles
and threaten wildly
with the ragged ends
prepared
to battle
for the blame



neither
would admit
this is all a defense
to protect
the still wounded organ
in their chest



each
would happily point the finger
and lay the guilt
in their lover's bed





but both
will sleep tonight
with the shadowy figure
of regret



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On Thursday September 14th, 2006, i tremble (40) writes:
*speechless*


On Thursday July 27th, 2006, xserratedsoulx (275) writes:
GOOD WRITE!!! ~lauren~


On Monday December 20th, 2004, weheldhandsattheendoftheworld (120) writes:
a lot of your peices i've read remind me of my last relationship... it was fucked up... i am glad it is over but your words capture the feelings beautifully!


On Monday September 6th, 2004, Dayer (201) writes:
this is very powerful...wow...


On Thursday September 2nd, 2004, steuss (144) writes:
You capture such intense moments with your words and description, It is amazingly well done. I've been there. I know it, but this is how it feels transcribed to words... wonderful.


On Tuesday August 31st, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx (131) writes:
I hope this isnt my situation...but I think it probably is.


On Monday August 30th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
wow, its one of the more powerful poem of this length ive read... very meaningful.. -MeL-


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, mysticventures (545) writes:
your words are so true to us all Bast


On Thursday August 26th, 2004, urbanhumility (1362) writes:
one of the most intelligent well spoken pieces i have ever read of yours........clear and resounding with truth and clarity..........well done grasshopper..........urban


On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, Invader Lyn (57) writes:
Awesome. You described the situation(s) perfectly. Personal, yet general. Great write.


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Lynaes (1125) writes:
I love this so much.. the descriptions are so true and unique. I especially like the "neither would admit" stanza. and I love it being spoken in the third person too. Amazing work.


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus (193) writes:
well done. ive enjoyed it. A_C


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, suicideseason (2141) writes:
_damn,Kitty...you have this way of making my jaw hit the ground everytime.this is so beautiful...as only you can do it.


On Monday August 23rd, 2004, glasshouse (801) writes:
What a sad and haunting image. I wish I did not know how this felt. Beautifully done, as always. -Glass



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