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my god

you make me
religious

between these sheets
i come up
with the names of saints
i never knew
and icons
i never
believed in

i was a skeptic
an atheist
in love

but you
you
cleanse my past with kisses
and sanctify my skin
as hallowed ground
leaving behind
a trail of worship

the wall
near my bed
shows traces
of what i've come
to consider
a miracle

you
are my dark skinned angel
come to claim
what has been offered you

i
am an alter
i give you
what i have
battered pieces of what was once

i display my heart
as yours
for the taking

one
sweet
sinful
kiss

and i know
my sacrifice
has been accepted

and i
i
have been saved



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On Thursday June 17th, 2004, Bakkhus Unbound (1101) writes:
'i am an alter i give you what i have battered pieces of what was once' This is a lovely, softbrutal piece w/ shadows on roads behind& ahead; what breathing can do to suffocating; nothing can stop you now...well done.


On Monday June 14th, 2004, glasshouse (771) writes:
What a beautiful metaphor... though it seems so real it can hardly be considered as such. You've done it again... amazed me. Great work. -Glass


On Monday June 14th, 2004, batman nipples (2255) writes:
I yearn for this, so bad.


On Monday June 14th, 2004, Lynaes (1109) writes:
Wonderful use of metaphor and word play, it really drew the emotions and the effect of them into you. I particularly liked "i am an alter i give you what i have". Stunning work, perfectly worded.


On Monday June 14th, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
wow,your amazing....gorgeous~ss


On Monday June 14th, 2004, worm (131) writes:
I believe I just may have become a believer! a nice touch to this one!


On Monday June 14th, 2004, Lydia Jade (783) writes:
awsome...i love the last stanza fits perfectly


On Monday June 14th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:
Beautiful, it's just extremely beautiful. I love the way you use religion in a kinky way. Great job on this piece.



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