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she's a race car girl
built
for speed
and dangerous curves

she's the unknown road
and the thrill
of the chase

driven
to win

powerfully made
she embraces turns
and lovers
with the same intensity

slippery when wet
her barometer
will exceed yours
her eyes
are green flags
she wants
to
go

you can slip
into her bucket seat
if you think
you're up
for the ride
but you better hang on
cause she won't slow down



she's lean
and smart



she'll break your heart

and be on
to the next track
to do it all again






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On Friday October 22nd, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis (607) writes:
This reminds me of Cake 'The Distance' Wild ride I like the way you compared it..written perfectly.


On Saturday September 11th, 2004, stuart_pid (217) writes:
"you can slip into her bucket seat" this poem is awsome, just remember to wear a seatbelt.


On Tuesday June 22nd, 2004, murder_in_clubland (497) writes:
I really like this its very cute.~ss


On Sunday June 13th, 2004, Jonas (877) writes:
had kind of a cake feel to it. slippery flow like rubber trying to grip the road...


On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Anth (1611) writes:
woah, superb work,intense and full of energy and attitude, positive and cool (did i just describe you?)


On Saturday June 12th, 2004, aXe FactoR (428) writes:
wow, a slick & wicked write. like it. -MeL-


On Saturday June 12th, 2004, An Expired Member (73) writes:
where can i found a girl like that..nice write


On Friday June 11th, 2004, Rebirth (81) writes:
God that's hot, or I'm just a slut for good writing. I love the comparisons to a race car. Great write here.


On Friday June 11th, 2004, An Expired Member (5) writes:
i'm new to DP, but i've read a lot on here and i must say yours stand out. in a good way, that is. i liked reading this piece. good creativity. you along with many others are excellent writers. keep it up. ~Ashley


On Wednesday June 9th, 2004, sixsixnine (563) writes:
fuck yeah! sounds promissing*) *669*


On Monday June 7th, 2004, evolve (2246) writes:
Excellent...everyone loves a girl who can speed things up.


On Monday June 7th, 2004, hate_doll (328) writes:
hehe, I like the sound of this girl...sounds like quite the ride! love it



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